I have to say that until chapter 152 and I am quite immersed in the story, on a personal level I would like the protagonist to use some weapon to give it style or to make him look more dominant, maybe a sword, dagger or spear and although the most common ones, well, in personal taste are the best, the way in which xian yan is dense with his feelings also keeps me in suspense and I hope he realizes what he feels, the writing is good, although I would like to know more about the background of the world of the magicians and Noah's current world and also knowing about his past as a wizard god and finally, author, thank you for writing this novel and we are not supporting anything here as a reader.

I really nothing to say except 'I Love This Novel!'

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A clumsy attempt at writing a novel. Don't get me wrong, I liked the concept and I've been waiting for it to get more chapters before reading, but now that I've read about 50 chapters I'm just disappointed and dissatisfied. It has a unique interesting idea and throughout the story you can see what the author wanted to characters to be like. (Like how MC can do things impossible to do with qi cultivation or how a green haired mommy is a playful sugar mommy) The main problem with this story: 1- Exposition is not done properly. Author doesn't know what to give more information about and what to skip. Noah basically has no personality here while his previous body owner has a set personality, or how author kept using flashbacks at the start, or how we have no info on the Mage god Noah, or how we got too many useless info about irrelevant things. this is mainly cuz author doesn't know how to properly show us what he wants us to see. 2- Characters have messed up personalities. It feels like author just wants to add scenes he read in other works and wanted to have them attached to certain characters. (Noah is supposedly ruthless but acts kind to who he wants to. But here everytime he acts he's either flirty or teasing and when he has his moments it's not that cool, It just doesn't reflect an old man who's filled with wisdom.) (There's also mommy, she's supposedly mature, but she got over her sons death and gets blushing by Noah from day 1, there's no development, she's still getting over her loss, why would she feel a tingle in her heart just from some kindness? She's not naive, she's mature. So it doesn't make sense.) The relationship and feelings they feels towards each other just feel forced. 3- Author is dragging out what could be over and done long ago. He's adding new enemies just for the sake of it. A lot of elements here are pointless and don't add to the story. Dear author, think thoroughly before adding pointless drama and pointless info, would any of this be relevant after 30~60 chapters? I think not. It's just for added drama, but that just makes it as boring and cliche as other cultivation works.

New novel, New world.This time I trying to dabble with both cultivation and magic world at once, it might get challanging but i think the plot is worth it.use this review as a place to ask questions regarding the book and suggestions and of course no spoilers let's get started with the jade beauty

Ah yes, perfect must read suggested nice comedy (yeah don't question my reviewing skills suckers)

First and foremost, I love the premise of the story. 🔥 The part where he panicked right before reincarnation got me laughing. 🤣 Anyway, the review: The author's use of words were playful and enthralling. The grammar was alright, but there's a few that need correction—only a few. 😎 Over all, it was a great read, and I feel like reading more. Definitely would recommend to others~! Great work author~! More chapters~!

this is Chaos, i love chaos. i need Chaos

it's so so good that i can't wait for new chapters....author plz mass release plz......................................................................

story is really good now that im up to the hundred or so chapter i have read but the mc is to stuck in his past. he has a new life i know he has alot of his past that haunt him but he has a need life and hopefully the story develops more so he can escape the shadows of his past and live in his new life