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QuiteSarcastic
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-I honestly looked forward to reading a proper and decently rated Naruto fanfic, but in all honesty, this was as far from that as it could have been. -Writing quality is decent, and the flow and explanations are well put together. -Story Development... This is where things start to go downhill. It's not that its... bad. It's more like it lacks reasoning and logic whenever the MC is given something, his reactions are unnatural as if a Chinese cultivator suddenly takes his place. Naruto suddenly will kill 12-15-year-olds to defend the "loved" ones he so conveniently forgets about who is left behind for his crush on Sasuke. -Character Design... kinda went ham on the Story Development and added tidbits there, but all I can say is that if you are looking for a "Naruto" fic, then don't expect one here. He is as far from a "Naruto-like" character as humanly possible. -World Background, nothing to say about that one. The fact that the prologue was a convoluted mess of epic proportions kind of set a bad example: "Sasuke kills himself to end whatever dream-like conflict between him and Naruto for some gods' forsaken reason. All that being said, give it a shot; it's not bad fan fiction by any means. It's just that you have to perhaps skim over certain details to enjoy it like proper reading material.

Naruto : Back to the Past

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Alfiemooon
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What you described sounds terrible lol

Kono_Dio_na
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You have my thanks. I dodge the bullet here.

KnightInArmor
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so do you know any proper Naruto fics?

QuiteSarcastic
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Linked this in a comment that got deleted some time ago, here's what I wrote. I got a few... 1. Naruto: Systematic Shinobi (Not finished currently on hiatus I believe.) 2. Peerless Darkness (Danzo fic, not too OC but a "what if" super decent.) 3. Naruto: Child of Chakra (By Mr.Gorilla, one if not the best fanfic story tellers.) 4. Naruto: The Blind Swordsman (Pre-Naruto birth) One of the best. 5. Reincarnated into the world of Naruto (By Onetim3) Not on webnovel, but on fanfiction. -- These are the ones I have on the top of my head at this point. If I recall more I'll see if I can add it here.

KnightInArmor:so do you know any proper Naruto fics?