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Review Detail of SalveYing in MHA:-Glitch In Reality

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SalveYing
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I want to share my opinion about the first 35 chapters. Frankly, I didn't like it, especially at the beginning with Izuku's backstory. They tried to create a tragic background with beatings and parental abandonment, but the execution was quite poor. The dialogues feel artificial; it seems there are only two facets for people: either they pity him or they hate him. However, the most disappointing aspect is how, after trying to end his life and awakening his abilities, he suddenly becomes some kind of supreme being. Nobody questions him, nobody challenges him. When he visits the lower districts in search of information and deals with a merchant, he completely lacks respect and the villain does not defend himself; he even ends up being his secretary because, according to him, he sounds intelligent even though the dialogues are lamentable. The way they try to justify the lack of response from other characters is shameful. It seems that everyone, except me, is stupid. Even 'All for One', who initially is presented as a formidable villain, becomes someone complacent no matter what he says, no matter how disrespectful he is, he will do nothing; he even reveals that he is the son of his enemy but he just says you're interesting, take whatever you want. Anyway, good luck to those who decide to delve into this reading.

MHA:-Glitch In Reality

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Abhishek_Kalyankar
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Who asked?

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DiabloRedfox
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dis you? 🤡🤡

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hero4hire
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He did

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LuciferTheDevil767
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MISTYSLAYER45
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i always try to look for these comments because i don't just want positive review i also want to here about the flaws of the story i thank you for opening my mind a little more to what is contained in the fic

SalveYing
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Your understanding of my comment makes me feel bad. Can't you insult me a little?

MISTYSLAYER45:i always try to look for these comments because i don't just want positive review i also want to here about the flaws of the story i thank you for opening my mind a little more to what is contained in the fic
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MISTYSLAYER45
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SalveYing:Your understanding of my comment makes me feel bad. Can't you insult me a little?