LuciferTheDevil767

kay, i will

nah you're doing good. it's i who need to improve.

ahh, i see...damn this helps a lot, thanks mate

i meant that as in 'when is the winter getting over?'

Hmm, I think you should have added a bit more reaction in the part where the Mc gets reincarnated...like it felt as if he accepted everything a bit too quickly

I read the first chapter after that i had to go for dinner😅

I see...i'll try to improve♥

16...

In the beginning, God created the heavens and the earth. The earth was without form, and void; and darkness was on the face of the deep. And the Spirit of God was hovering over the face of the waters. Then God said, "LET BRO COOK" 🗣🔥🔥🔥

no more what?