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ramon14680
ramon14680Lv141yr
2024-01-15 22:16

I like it. It’s a story about Harry that gets a technology system with an ai that guides him. The writing quality is good. I can’t see any grammatical or vocabular errors. The only negative thing I have to say is that I think you are overdoing it with the ai Nigel. Every four paragraphs there is Nigel giving advice with a metaphor or a reference. And I like that but you do it a bit too much. I don’t need half a chapter of the AI saying that the mind is like a puzzle or that manipulation is all about subtlety. So I recommend doing it just a bit less.

Harry Potter with Technology System

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4.6
343 Chs

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ErickHenrique_BR
ErickHenrique_BRLv5

I didn't like that an AI is manipulating the MC, in fact, it seems that the MC doesn't know how to do anything without the AI, another reason is that it's a technological System but why doesn't everything he does have anything to do with creating technology? It seems more like a help system and not a technological one, if he was just going to learn magic it would be better to put the title as a magic system

1yr

SalveYing
SalveYingLv11

I just read about 30 chapters, and this is my initial review. I don't like the system, or rather Nigel. I don't know who the real protagonist is, Nigel or Harry? Nigel guides him at an exaggerated level. For example, 'Well, Harry, let's manipulate your aunt,' or 'Harry, your aunt is sensitive, you need to say some nice words to deliver the final blow.' That's not guidance; it's manipulation. It could be called 'Reincarnation as the Harry Potter system' since it acts like an independent person with knowledge of HP. Also, why is it called a technological system if it doesn't bring any technology? Finally, the pace is too slow in my opinion. I'm not trying to offend anyone. Have a good day.

10mth
Ep_E_X
Ep_E_XLv2

I understand that Harry needs basic knowledge to survive in the early stage but the author overdid it by integrating an overly intelligent Ai that seems to manipulate him.. The idea is actually good but if the Ai is more like "great sage" from tensura who analyze the surrounding and then make conclusion to guide the mc it's much better because it gives the reader a better look of how different this harry is,reader can see what type of Harry we can see in this fanfic by seeing how he decides things without too much help from an Ai.. we can also see character development in this like when he make a mistake..the Ai and Harry can develop together

12mth
Zaelum
ZaelumLv5

As always pretty good read. But if I have to be nitpicky, author, can you make this one a little bit longer than normal?. Just to make us be able to immerse in the world, I really love Harry Potter!.

1yr
HeavenlyIko
HeavenlyIkoLv15

Author the stories is good but, is it technology system? cause I don't see it, and if it is......it's taking forever no???

12mth
Flaiver
FlaiverLv4

I like the novel. But I came to read about Harry Potter and techno-magic, and what I got was a novel about family problems. It was interesting at the beginning but already chapter 13 and the plot is not moving forward. Just to be honest, I don’t care about Pitunya, she’s not an intern to me at all as a person. I hope that this psychology session will end soon and the story about techno-magic will begin.

1yr
Orc
OrcLv6

You did a bit of touch here and there and specially liked the lily and thief James well done ... hopefully it build up a bond with snap 🫰 sad but great guy

1yr
AlwaysHasBeen
AlwaysHasBeenLv13

I haven't read the story yet, but considiring it's description is pretty interesting and the author's other works. I guess waiting for more chapters is worth it and here's a random meme for you to take.

1yr
XCouchPotatoX
XCouchPotatoXLv13

overall, it's good. it's just the pace is too slow for me. 100+ in and we're still at Christmas break of first year. first 50 being pre-hogwarts. while I love me a good HP fanfic, 60-70+ chapters(just guesstimating) for each year feels a bit too much for me.

9mth
Demikus
DemikusLv5

It sounds interesting but development of the novel is very slow. It seems like author will describe every day, every lesson in this story, so after 50-60 chapters boy will be finally sort in Gryffindor.

1yr
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