Honestly, the author doesn’t know what gender his characters are half the time. Besides this the names of the characters change in the same paragraph. Grammar is terrible, no sentence structure. The world background could’ve been good, the power design was interesting in the first 2 chapters. After a “3 year” time skip the Mc now has more chakra than a whole squad of Jonins and Chunins, I believe it was stated to be they don’t even have 1% of my total chakra. Seriously? Thats chapter 3 or 4. After that it’s the classic I’ll hide my strength so I won’t stand out. There was no point. I got up to chapter 28/30 maybe. I don’t really recall the exact chapter. I just know that the Mc could make 600 shadow clones that could all spam rasengan’s to hold of the Raikage. That’s another thing, instead of saying Kage he calls them thied generation shadows, fourth generation shadows.
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