Item: I dispose Corpses In Konoha
Rating: 1
Author: CarefeeDaoist

CarefeeDaoistLv151yr

2023-12-07 20:54

In fact no corrections were made the grammar is still terrible

I dispose Corpses In Konoha

harsh07

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144 Chs

Liked by 17 people

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harsh07Author

I'm improving that again

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It's really great and interesting Naruto fanfiction!!! I love it!! 😍😍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too 👍 I like the idea of system corpse point, it's interesting to see he get point from destroy/decomposed corpse.. I don't mind an op MC (although he doesn't how strong he is after 3 years he got the system).. I also don't mind how cautious MC is (many say he's coward because he always fighting with a clone, and he only come after fight is over.. But I think he's smart and overly cautious, although he's not to do so now, his wood clone can hold again Raikage and Tsuchikage).. I hope MC/Natsu can become Hokage (and maybe kill Danzo, the two conselor/elders, and Sarutobi).. Konoha need new hokage/blood to change and make Konoha great again (especially kill Danzo) Love your story author san.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍

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Just one question: why are they disposing corpses of enemy ninjas without:- Yamanaka mind reading trading it back for their own comrades corpse after the war Studing kekei gankai or other things Giving it to medical or scientific department I feel like ninja won't do something like this especially to S rank enemies whose bodies hide alot of secrets.

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harsh07Author

Updated all the previous chapters today and changed some names .......................................................................................................................

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harsh07Author

I've corrected Chapters 1 to 11 today changed the name of Uziki Xiyan to Uzuki Yugao Please suggest what more improvement I can make I'll do that

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harsh07Author

I'm going to correct the grammar and other things in all the chapters and it will be completed in 2 or 3 days What I want to ask is if should I change the names of the characters too

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