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2024-03-15 01:21

Give it a try, it's overall a good fan fiction, with a lot of potential, there are very few grammatical mistakes, and the story seems to lean toward avoiding to strictly stick with the original plot but is not that obvious yet as of chapter 45. In short MC got reincarnated in a neutral pureblood wizard family, he starts as a baby apparently but we dont see the first 6 years of his childhood, he has the ability to see "the winds of magic" and gets new "Lores" (themed spells) progressively (he learns HP magic at the same time), he isn't OP when he starts Hogward, not weak either since he can beat up most 1rst and probably even 3rd years, he studied a lot early so he has the theory but not the mana for the advanced spells yet. He actively tries to change the plot even if the changes are not too visible yet, there is a bit of humor here and there with his pet (a normal one, not a dragon...) and Hogwarts friends, the first lores he gets give spells that seem pretty dark and he ends up in slytherin but he is not a dark lord in the making, no romance yet and thankfully no sign of harem, which is normal since as of chapter 45 it's still the first year. So yeah, pretty good so far, as i say earlier, give it a try !

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