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There is a surprisingly useful spell named "Reparo"... Since you can obliviate people I have no doubt that using this spell is not a problem for you and your 7 NEWT Oustanding...
It's mentioned in chapter 4 that this is "a world where 9th ranks don't exist" but just like you I highly doubt that there are no 9th rank hidden somewhere. Maybe there are no human 9th rank, but some monster/creature sleeping somewhere has reached 9th rank, maybe the world itself can't sustain someone of this rank or maybe there will be an otherworld invasion with a 9th rank leading it... Long story short, i think the same, there will surely be a 9th rank somehow, but it doesn't change the fact it was mentioned earlier that there are no 9th rank in this world.
As of chapter 54, we are at the chunnin exam, and the MC is strong enough to beat a jonin but can't really show it. The academy arc is a bit long in case it worries you it ends around chapter 30 but it's because the MC uses it as a opportunity to try things and train a lot, since they don't have missions or things like that that could hinder his training.
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Excellent Naruto fanfiction so far ! (chapter 54) The story is really slow but it's to be expected of a story about someone not extremely talented but with an infinite amount of time in his hands to compensate quality (talent) with quantity (efforts and accumulation). There are some grammatical mistakes here and there, but nothing too dramatic, it's perfectly readable and even better than just readable. The story has a lot of details and a bit of character growth with time so far. The author seems to have though a lot about his story seeing the concept he brings up and how they are explained, and how the MC is not too OP despite having the cheat he has. Long story short, someone who knows the plot of Naruto reincarnates as a random character in this world, he can choose the cheat/talents/clan he has within moderation and chose the time control ability. The ability grows with him and only allows for time travel in the beginning, to give him a lot of time to train despite his normal talents. I highly recommend reading it, good job author !
Honestly, that's exactly what I would have done, it's not time travel or time stop that he got, but time CONTROL and there is probably nothing stronger than that in terms of survivability, especially in a world like this.
True, it should be able to gain him some time, until he finds something better, like the real stone, an alternative or the cure.
It was mentioned that the stone that Hagrid picked up with Harry at Gringotts was a fake. But since that stone was a fake, why wouldn't this stone in the mirror be a fake as well ? It feels like the MC is betting a lot on it, without any proof that it will be the real one and since he clearly desire the stone he won't be able to retrieve it from the mirror anyway. (Maybe he will steal it from Harry since he knows the story but that's highly dangerous isn't it ? And he wouldn't need to clear these trials since the golden trio will do it for him, he just has to follow them or Quirell while being invisible)
Honestly, being a mage is better in this world (it seems more prestigious at least), and isn't he already a sword master ? He will have to learn magic from scratch while he already knows a lot about fighting with his body and sword thanks to his past life. I have no doubt that finding someone to teach him aura would be easier than finding a mage to teach him magic, as well. The only good reason I can think about is the fact that there are no 9th circle human mages in this world and as such there could be a fatal flaw in the way humain train on the path of magic that he could avoid if he learnt on his own (he is the MC, if anyone can, especially without guidance, it's him) but would be fatal if he were to follow the path they all already use. Only time and more chapters will tell I guess
Excellent idea, that's a really good trump card and worthy of his Ace pokemon ! Especially if he gets a Mega Altaria, he could then have a really good pokemon immune to most projectiles, and training sound based moves for the pixilate + hypervoice or something similar could truly make Altaria shine !
Concerning the translation of the name it's true, there is also another meaning through, "Vol" in french means either "Flight" or "Theft" : he can also be called "Theft of death" ! But "Flight from death" is more interesting because it hints at the fact that Voldemort is scared of death and created horcruxes to avoid death, to fly away from death and become "untouchable", out of reach for Death. Funny since he is also one of the only wizards who can fly without a broom in the story. (the Dark Flight spell he uses in the films) (Might even be linked to Death from the story of the Deathly Hallows who couldn't find or touch the 3rd brother who hid with the invisibility cloak, but i probably overthink it). So good job author, I like when you put it like that !
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Isn't it a bit exaggerated ? I could understand if he used the shadow clones to learn it so quickly but it's a bit forced here, aside from the fact that he knows the seals by heart, as easy as they are (i doubt anyone does, but okay, that's a story anyway), can he even do it with a genin level of chakra ? Also, he couldn't do it for two months and just when the demon starts talking he magically manages to do it just to prove it to her ? It really feels forced here. Besides, a 6 years old who knows tree climbing+water walking+healing justsu+ now chidori (A rank jutsu isn't just cabbage seriously)+apparently rasengan (another one...) next chapter... once again i would understand if he used shadow clones to learn all of it in a short time, but he apparently doesn't (and he can't use it with his chakra reserves anyway...). There is also the fact that he has the thread fruit power but better, he is really strong at this point in time, and without any formal training and guidance. Yes, such a level of power is needed to stand up to the level of the monsters of this world but it feels rushed and forced.
While I do agree that this development is good i though it would be different : since this ritual is supposed to tranfert the talent of an individual to another one, Vincent could have simply replaced Draco, that way he would have had access to magic, something that would require a lot of efforts to strengthen (7 years at Hogwarts) but that doesn't have the "price" in demonic essence that the demonic magic has. That way you would have an opportinity to make Vincent go to Hogwarts (maybe you don't want that and are simply using the world of Harry Potter for the potential it has without caring about the plot (which is not going to be relevant anyway according to the prediction of Grindelwald shown before)) even if he stays for less than 7 years or with a lot of timeskip just to show that he is learning magic. But i think this developpement has a lot of potential as well, since Lucius is no more and Draco wont be the pureblood supremacist he was supposed to become without his father's education. Anyway so far i love this story, i hope it continues like this.