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Hasan_Shopnil
Hasan_ShopnilLv41yr
2024-04-15 06:11

Thanks for the Awesome Harry Potter Fic.👍 The Writing Style,Quality&English of this Fic is Awesome. Author-san PLEASE Add all Harry Potter-[Books,Movies&Games] Contents(Plot,Characters&Unique Items) in this Fic. I would've liked It More If MC also focused on the Muggle Side of World alongside the Wizarding/Magical Side of the World like "[Money,Status,Martial Arts,Weapon Mastery,Science&Technology etc.]";I mean Its the 1990s but MC isn't taking Advantage of It at all with his Future Knowledge,Tsk. MC should also Try to Advance Wizarding World Forward along Side Muggle's Modern Era Advancements,MC should also Acquire 'Status,Power&Position' in Wizarding Britain. MC should Expose about "Rita Skeeter's Fake News Publication & Gilderoy Lockhart's Fake Exaggerative Fake Tales." MC should Maybe try Researching&Creating "Magitech(Enchantments&Runes+Magic Artifacts+Scientific Technology)" in the Future. This Fic has a lot of Potential. I ❤️ It so Far.👍

Winds Of Magic In Hogwarts

KuroWashi1903
4.8
75 Chs

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Boroxx
BoroxxLv11

Too little chapters to properly write a review but just going to put a 4 star out there since im a massive fan of warhammer and the potterverse myself. The only thing i hope is that the author wont write the MC to be Harry Potter's little fanboy or follow many of the other fanfic writers out there and try and "equalize" the combat power of the 2 worlds. Both worlds have their own strenghts and weaknesses. Like everyone who knows only the tiniest bit of the 2 worlds knows that Warhammer has a extremely huge power ceiling while the Harry Potter world might have more jack of all trades magic but has a extremely low power ceiling. And seeing a Nagash level Voldemort or a Sigmar level Dumbledore would just make everyone uncomfortable.

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StromLantern
StromLanternLv5

Story so far is great, no notable problem with spelling or grammar which is always a big plus, character is an OC with a good solid backstory, there's something like 40 chapters on the P A T R E O N, so hopefully updates will be consistent as well which is a win in my book, also the same Author has done great stuff in the past so I'm personally looking forward to the future of this Fic.

1yr
ShadowDialga
ShadowDialgaLv4

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Zaquen
ZaquenLv4

so far so good, before he go to Hogwarts it's enjoyable but when he's at Hogwarts i feel like the story begin to slow down and i don't really know about Warhammer but the magic he used is nice. it's just need more chapter and i hope the harem is not that big max 3/4

1yr
KuroWashi1903
KuroWashi1903Author

It will be a slow-burning, weak-to-strong story; I tried to make a faster pace than my other books. English is not my first language, but I will fix my mistakes if you point them out in the comments.

1yr
dark_knight01
dark_knight01Lv4

I like the book and MC's personality there are instances where the story doesn't follow the cannon but considering that it's a fanfic it's understandable

1yr
goumri_ilyas
goumri_ilyasLv4

The only thing i don't like aboute your novel is that you don't upload a lot so when a chapter is out i feel happy but most of the time in your chapteers you keep repiting the same thing whit refrasing it and it could have been a good quality for your novels if the chapters where a bit longer

1yr
THIZZGATOR
THIZZGATORLv4

It's not bad just not my cup of tea. Mc is very young child for far more time than I could stomach. Takes forever just to get to hogwarts. Every good bit of this is overshadowed by 2 or 3 times the amount of over descriptive text about child timeframe nonsense. Just not for me but hey give it a chance you might like it.

1yr
WolfLord
WolfLordLv14

a great and interesting concept anyone who likes Harry Potter should read this

1yr
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