it's an okay fanfic, i was a fun read untll the constant us of emoticons like this (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ inside the sentence structure. its truly annoying stop it.
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I fixed it, but a lot of people like this way of expressing characters' emotions. I decided to do one chapter once a week in this format to please everyone
ya, i'ts funny once in a while, but you started using it too much and wrong. The point of it is to describe or show an expression, you used it too express feelings and thoughts. Thats not how you use it, it completely ruined the immersion of the actual story.
Author i have only seen one other novel use it succefully its called "cultivation chat group" you should give it a try for inspiration if you want to see other do it. good luck
You can‘t please everyone. Just do as you like.
you should write for yourself and not cater to the readers choice cause then your writing style is going to constantly change back and forth and disrupt any sort of flow that you had going on. It's jarring when you have emoticons being used in a book, those are reserved for texting someone else so its an awkward way to 'express' a characters feeling and also lazy
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What do you think of book right now ?
hey i like you using emote lol emote expression not just boom boom
