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DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv61yr
2023-11-28 12:50

Author has great a ambitions but the execution is quite average if not below average. Though im sure as you gain more knowledge on writing you will improve and the next story shall be better.

Hogwarts : leveling up the world

The_last_airbender
4.5
148 Chs

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The_last_airbender
The_last_airbenderAuthor

what do you think about last 10 chapters. I tried to change the writing style a bit

1yr
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DaoistxsblgQ
DaoistxsblgQLv1

Интересно единственный минус как по мне слабо продуманы уровни магов то бишь какая разница между Дамблдором и Ровенкло почему она сильней? Что это за прорыв который она претерпела.

1yr
The_last_airbender
The_last_airbenderAuthor

will be explained in like 10 chapters.

DaoistxsblgQ:Интересно единственный минус как по мне слабо продуманы уровни магов то бишь какая разница между Дамблдором и Ровенкло почему она сильней? Что это за прорыв который она претерпела.
1yr
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DaoistxsblgQ
DaoistxsblgQLv1

Интересстно только малость странно показал характер Одина в комиксах он был до одури гордым персонажем хотя с его уровнем силы это и обоснованно, тут получилась смесь комикса и фильма? Еще как по мне немного странно что Гг попросил за свою помощь только книги Асгарда, учитывая что Асгард правит другими мирами где в каждом мире свои особенности типо Леденных великанов, светлых эльфов, Гномов, вот было бы интересно увидеть встречу Гномов Марвел и Гоблинов ГП и те и те непревзойденные кузнецы чью творения могут подорожать своим ужасом по типу меча Гриффиндора который поглощает все и становится сильней про Гномов и их достижения и говорить не стоит один Мьелнир и Гром секира чего стоят.

The_last_airbender:what do you think about last 10 chapters. I tried to change the writing style a bit
1yr
DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6

The story is much better now i read it to the last chapter keep up the good work

The_last_airbender:what do you think about last 10 chapters. I tried to change the writing style a bit
1yr
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AlphaHost
AlphaHostLv13

it's an okay fanfic, i was a fun read untll the constant us of emoticons like this (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ inside the sentence structure. its truly annoying stop it.

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ChaoticPlayer
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No Lily&Snape please🙏 [img=Mad] 😑[img=angry]

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helical_chaos
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Actually I like this fanfiction. But the author is very inconsistent in updating the chapters. So even if you like it , without the consistency of the author you can't appreciate it . Thank you very much . I hope that the author will update it more frequently.

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Hyuga_Tobirama
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Story has potential! The author is clearly trying to build something great and he is doing good so far. As long as the story isn’t dropped then this story could go on to be something great

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After_Wing
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This is the best I can to rate your story author. I know Patreon but I can complained all I want while you sit there and smug about it. Good story but I just can't stick around. ( ੭ ･ᴗ･ )੭

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N1CK999
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its a good story but the ch are short

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Ardemis
ArdemisLv1

I'd like the first world that they come into contact with is Game of Thrones but was the next one after that since there will be multiple worlds. ps. also the only reason why I didn't give it a higher evaluation is because of the updates I just wish it would update more frequently

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Mr_ErroR
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its one of the great stories in my library every time I get an update I'm excited so I have been on the platform for like 4 years and this is one of the best I have ever read so give it a try I wont spoil anything but its really good

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