The story premise is promising, So kudos to author on that.There is a small issue that i find daunting. It seems like the story is written using ChatGPT. There are sentences written in the story that are written with too many words.Like author inserts so many big complex words in simple sentences to increase word count and in turns it becomes irritating for me. Still i liked Author's story. Hope this helps author to improve. [img=recommend]

So, having read up to chapter 15, what I can say about this book is:1. The writing quality is great. Since I started reading, I haven't come across any sort of grammatical error or misspelling that would pull me out of my immersion into the book.2. Novel is action-oriented, and author uses descriptive writing style to draw in readers to the fantastical world of his story.3. Main Character and Side Characters have good development, which we would continue to see as the story progresses.4. I like the level-up system of this book. IMHO, it's rather unique and more compelling than others that use 'ding'. I can't explain it, you will have to read for yourself to know what I am talking about.5. Though still in development, I can already foretell that the world background of this story will be great and immersive. Cons: Chapter update rate is slow. I get that author has another life other than writing, but that doesn't mean you should starve us. 😅 I hope the rate of chapter upload gets better soon. Keep doing great, author. 👏

Great novel characterized by peak writing quality, wonderful characters, wholesome action sequences, excellent descriptive details and beautifully appealing worldbuilding! Well done Author. You really put your best into this. I hope this gem-studded book gets the recognition it truly deserves! ♥ ♥ ♥

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Love the book. Love the concept. Looking forward to future updates. It's has the makings of a great novel. But it's just, umm very stingant, very uniform, too much going into explanation and description of certain events that's happening. It's a great story and I'm enjoying it but it's hurting my head reading everything being explained. Lol That's just my opinion. Look forward to future updates. Keep up the great work [img=update]

The style is very much characteristic to the author—descriptive, clean, and impactful. Another thing that pops out is the really likable MC. As it is, the tension in the story is beginning to escalate, especially now that the MC, Maxmillan, has received the power-up battle system. Concl: The book is a really good combination of fantastical (magical) elements, sci-fi, action and many other enthralling stuff. I simply love it. Keep up with the great work author. ✨

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