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Easy_OP999Life
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2023-12-29 17:21

The story premise is promising, So kudos to author on that.There is a small issue that i find daunting. It seems like the story is written using ChatGPT. There are sentences written in the story that are written with too many words.Like author inserts so many big complex words in simple sentences to increase word count and in turns it becomes irritating for me. Still i liked Author's story. Hope this helps author to improve. [img=recommend]

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koladeizdavid
koladeizdavidAuthor

Hi, thanks for the review 😊. And to address a part of your review, the story is not written using ChatGPT. It's something I put a lot of thought into. I am sorry about the big words that you find irritating. I will try to improve. Thanks for the review once again. πŸ₯‚

Easy_OP999Life
Easy_OP999LifeLv4

Thanx for reviewing my comment Author-san.

koladeizdavid:Hi, thanks for the review 😊. And to address a part of your review, the story is not written using ChatGPT. It's something I put a lot of thought into. I am sorry about the big words that you find irritating. I will try to improve. Thanks for the review once again. πŸ₯‚
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