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2023-12-13 14:03

So, having read up to chapter 15, what I can say about this book is:1. The writing quality is great. Since I started reading, I haven't come across any sort of grammatical error or misspelling that would pull me out of my immersion into the book.2. Novel is action-oriented, and author uses descriptive writing style to draw in readers to the fantastical world of his story.3. Main Character and Side Characters have good development, which we would continue to see as the story progresses.4. I like the level-up system of this book. IMHO, it's rather unique and more compelling than others that use 'ding'. I can't explain it, you will have to read for yourself to know what I am talking about.5. Though still in development, I can already foretell that the world background of this story will be great and immersive. Cons: Chapter update rate is slow. I get that author has another life other than writing, but that doesn't mean you should starve us. 😅 I hope the rate of chapter upload gets better soon. Keep doing great, author. 👏

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