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Bebells
BebellsLv111yr
2024-01-23 12:45

Perfeito! A construção do mundo foi interessante o suficiente, e provavelmente continuará a melhorar, já que ainda é o início da história. O MC tem um caráter interessante, e por enquanto suas ações foram conforme a sua situação... Então nada a reclamar. A taxa de atualização é meio imprecisa, mas o autor pode não ter tanto tempo pra escrever, então ele está perdoado (lol) O desenvolvimento da história por enquanto está num ritmo interessante, então nada a reclamar também. Bem, minha avaliação pode ser beem tendenciosa pelo fato de eu amar essa história hehe... Mas recomendo fortemente que você leia ela e tire suas próprias conclusões. Ah, sua interação com as garotas é bom também. Poderia ser mais natural, já que algumas pequenas parte ali são quase forçadas... Mas ainda bom o suficiente. Minha primeira análise "aprofundada", então me perdoem por qualquer estupidez dita. Até mais, Tee-hee~

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