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bondarant
bondarantLv21yr
2023-12-13 22:01

it's really good, but honestly? i expected the themes to lean more heavily on the ranks and SAS4 military, this one seems to lean more towards kingdom building and politics, i want this guy to get general rank and participate in planetary wars.

Interdimensional Mercenary (SAS 4 Zombie Assault Fanfic)

Daoist_KittyKat
4.4
158 Chs

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Daoist_KittyKat
Daoist_KittyKatAuthor

u mean to lean more on the SAS 4 itself? I mean, i thought of it. once the outbreak is settled. I probably do that coz that's the only logical thing but probably on another world though. I mean, the clue is there... Orbital Fortress? A spacecraft armed to teeth with offensive power that double as self sufficient industrial manufacturing plant that can pump out guns, bullets and armor provided he have material and blueprint?

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Daoist_KittyKat
Daoist_KittyKatAuthor

also, politic is important early on. manpower, resources and economic. How is a war going to be waged without soldiers, economy and industry supporting it?

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bondarant
bondarantLv2

the system itself has the capability to do so, you could just make it so that he can't arm/recruit/buy conscripts is because he doesn't have a high enough rank plus you already made consessions with him giving him the flawless progenitor serum instead you could have naturally boosted his physique and constitution with each rank up and you already hinted at a higher command structure existing that saved the main character from being kidnapped

Daoist_KittyKat:also, politic is important early on. manpower, resources and economic. How is a war going to be waged without soldiers, economy and industry supporting it?
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Daoist_KittyKat
Daoist_KittyKatAuthor

I wonder how should I explain this...So, it's like this. The System don't own everything. The actual SAS 4 universe (AU) exists somewhere out there capable of Interdimensional travels it sort of the same universe as my 'Yet Another Ray With System' fic. Yes, a higher command structure exist. But not subservient to the System. When Captain Bane save Adam, System actually create a contract and pull some string using it's power to get Captain Bane into Remnant and take that contract to save Adam.

bondarant:the system itself has the capability to do so, you could just make it so that he can't arm/recruit/buy conscripts is because he doesn't have a high enough rank plus you already made consessions with him giving him the flawless progenitor serum instead you could have naturally boosted his physique and constitution with each rank up and you already hinted at a higher command structure existing that saved the main character from being kidnapped
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Daoist_KittyKat
Daoist_KittyKatAuthor

as for the rank up boosting his strength and vitality is not that i didn't want. but it do not fit the no magic bs rule I imposed. the serum is just a justification for me to make mc stronger as for the higher rank unlock more functions thing I will keep in consideration

bondarant:the system itself has the capability to do so, you could just make it so that he can't arm/recruit/buy conscripts is because he doesn't have a high enough rank plus you already made consessions with him giving him the flawless progenitor serum instead you could have naturally boosted his physique and constitution with each rank up and you already hinted at a higher command structure existing that saved the main character from being kidnapped
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bondarant
bondarantLv2

you could just explain it as nanomachines making him stronger etc like that nano machine novel and about the SAS 4 universe, you don't have to actually have the whole universe and its command structure be obedient to the system after all system is just themed in SAS 4 but the actual system is a whole another thing, SO you could just have him unlock i dunno some kind of cloning tech and disguise it as conscription or recruiting just give them the same armor and guns badumm you have SAS soldiers on standby

Daoist_KittyKat:as for the rank up boosting his strength and vitality is not that i didn't want. but it do not fit the no magic bs rule I imposed. the serum is just a justification for me to make mc stronger as for the higher rank unlock more functions thing I will keep in consideration
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Daoist_KittyKat
Daoist_KittyKatAuthor

my idea actually is he eventually can recruit people that are willing and then the system will convert them into SAA Soldiers

bondarant:you could just explain it as nanomachines making him stronger etc like that nano machine novel and about the SAS 4 universe, you don't have to actually have the whole universe and its command structure be obedient to the system after all system is just themed in SAS 4 but the actual system is a whole another thing, SO you could just have him unlock i dunno some kind of cloning tech and disguise it as conscription or recruiting just give them the same armor and guns badumm you have SAS soldiers on standby
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Daoist_KittyKat
Daoist_KittyKatAuthor

but hey, cloning seems easier

bondarant:you could just explain it as nanomachines making him stronger etc like that nano machine novel and about the SAS 4 universe, you don't have to actually have the whole universe and its command structure be obedient to the system after all system is just themed in SAS 4 but the actual system is a whole another thing, SO you could just have him unlock i dunno some kind of cloning tech and disguise it as conscription or recruiting just give them the same armor and guns badumm you have SAS soldiers on standby
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Genesis_Alter
Genesis_AlterLv2

And not only that... it can also give you almost infinite soldiers.

Daoist_KittyKat:but hey, cloning seems easier
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Daoist_KittyKat
Daoist_KittyKatAuthor

yeah, but I want him to work of it y'know. at least he need to convince people to become his soldier. not just appear out of nowhere

Genesis_Alter:And not only that... it can also give you almost infinite soldiers.
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i'm really liking this fanfic, the general idea is interesting and the writing quality is quite good. i like the fact that he's slowly getting stronger instead of becoming op instantly and seeing a mc using guns instead of the usual swords and spears is quite refreshing, but i don't know how usefull will guns be when he will become really strong. Anyway, good fanfic 10/10 would recommend.

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