I never thought that someone would have the idea of creating a fanfic using sas 4 as a base, a game that I was very fond of, I remember playing with a Heavy and Shockfield Black, it's a shame that they never tried to improve the game. I'm going to give it a chance and hope it's a good read.

Very cool idea and it hooked me until I read the first couple chapters. The author does more telling than showing. Example of telling instead of showing: He went to get a smoke then he bought a ticket and then he died. When he woke up he was scared because he just died. More showing less telling: The moment his feet left the concrete, he knew something was wrong. There was an unsettling absence of gravity, like he had been sucked into a void. Looking down, he saw his body, limp and lifeless on the ground. Confusion and fear gripped him as he realized he had died.

Author shameless review to get this book recommended. Feel free to give review no matter how bad it is as long as it's reasonable and not trolling.

I read it up to chapter 40, but to continue reading I first want to vent here. This story is average at best. First let's talk about the protagonist, he is absolutely average, below if I go by my opinion, he has nothing remarkable in himself, no intelligence, wisdom, knowledge, not even self-confidence. Most of the time it seems that he doesn't even have a clue about what is happening around him and in his situation, it is absolutely frustrating to read him and follow his story, if you put Agent, his maid as the main protagonist of this story you would have a story Better yet, he outshines him in absolutely everything (which is not very difficult), more efficient, intelligent, wise, and even in leadership, for me the protagonist is a puppet of this maid, he almost always follows her instructions and advice, I don't know if because he likes the servant MC, capable and his thoughts are predetermined by the system. Another absolutely unpleasant thing is the "comedy", I don't know if the author simply has no ideas or whatnot, but he takes out all the anime cliches and puts them in this story, anime cliches don't go well with an author novel!, but well, the author portrays the MC as an isekai, beta and generic protagonist who cannot stand firm and say no to girls, frankly ridiculous and illogical situations in the story abound, such as when 20,000 girls "kidnap" the MC Imagine it as 20,000 people carrying one person on the street dragging him, I don't know how these things happen but they don't make sense. But hey, I will continue reading simply because I am interested in the other world, let's see how far I can last.

Ok first i will read this, then i will give author a power stone, and then will write this nonsense review just to support author and he can't do nothing to stop me hahahahahahahahaha. btw: author can i pet you?

unfathomably good the story is engaging and the pace is good keep it up!

i'm really liking this fanfic, the general idea is interesting and the writing quality is quite good. i like the fact that he's slowly getting stronger instead of becoming op instantly and seeing a mc using guns instead of the usual swords and spears is quite refreshing, but i don't know how usefull will guns be when he will become really strong. Anyway, good fanfic 10/10 would recommend.

it's really good, but honestly? i expected the themes to lean more heavily on the ranks and SAS4 military, this one seems to lean more towards kingdom building and politics, i want this guy to get general rank and participate in planetary wars.

Awesome beginning with a great premise of SAS 4 system I thought no one would ever write anything with that but it was not only being written but also so good 👍👍👍.