not terrible and when reading you probably won't mind it much but it lacks anything that would make a book truly great. there are no people besides for mc and even he's struggling to be someone, anyone else is just an npc. the base class is kinda fun and the restriction on it is good, but mc doesn't use his skill set to even 3 percent of it's limit. Spells and abilities will be gained and then promptly forgotten for the next few weeks, there's no experimenting or theory crafting happening on mcs part until he finds himself in a situation that he cant handle where he then of course figures it out. author also doesn't keep a proper notes doc so names change, tiers change and any other conceivable inconsistentcy you can think of. it's quite apparent that the author is new to writing so many of the mentioned issues will get better as time passes especially since every once in a while you can clearly see that he's attempting to elevate his level by giving backstory or a character arc, both currently lacking in execution but giving hope for the future. As of chapter 27 there has sadly been nothing that would elevate this above typical dungeon stories.
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Thank you for the review, also, don't worry I'll improve to fill in the gaps that are currently lacking As for a special part of the story.. Well, it hasn't begun yet, but there is something really unique that will pop up in a bit, don't forget to come back and enjoy it when it's complete.
