webnovel
Honest_critic1980
Honest_critic1980Lv131yr
2023-12-21 19:17

I really like this story. It has a fast pace feel to it. the Mc progression and developments is nice and description of environment is not bad. Only strong criticism is all other characters beside the mc feels flat or not developed to be support character. a small criticism is mc fights are seeming to straight forward like dragon ball fight and are too reliant on skills and not enough on tactics. would reading so strategy and tactics books help? or some fight styles book? still it's a good book and I'll keep reading it till it's not free.

Liked by 13 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
Blutmond
BlutmondLv3
Related Stories