Item: Rise Of The Primordial Devourer
Rating: 5
Author: Primordial_Devour

Primordial_DevourAuthor1yr

2023-11-13 11:39

It’s only right to rate my own novel 5 stars. Right now the novel might not seem great but the real action will begin later. Just give it a try!

Rise Of The Primordial Devourer

Primordial_Devour

4.7

3 Chs

Liked by 6 people

Replies19

Primordial_DevourAuthor

If you got any questions ask right away.

1yr

BlueIndoLv14

I’m Just wondering when is Liam going back in time before the apocalypse because it seems like your doing a mini ark before that?

1yr

Primordial_DevourAuthor

It would probably be around between chapter 25-30

BlueIndo:I’m Just wondering when is Liam going back in time before the apocalypse because it seems like your doing a mini ark before that?

1yr

BlueIndoLv14

Primordial_Devour:It would probably be around between chapter 25-30

1yr

Romance_guyLv14

Romance?

Primordial_Devour:If you got any questions ask right away.

1yr

Primordial_DevourAuthor

I can add it but later in the story

Romance_guy:Romance?

1yr

Romance_guyLv14

Primordial_Devour:I can add it but later in the story

1yr

SwiftescapeLv15

Fake villain. Please remove tag.

Primordial_Devour:I can add it but later in the story

1yr

lolbingololLv13

Bro doesn’t know what villain means

Swiftescape:Fake villain. Please remove tag.

1yr

Romance_guyLv14

Allow

lolbingolol:Bro doesn’t know what villain means

1yr

Daoist_CultureLv15

I see nice babe on the cover, so I wonder if this is a harem 😎

Primordial_Devour:If you got any questions ask right away.

1yr

Primordial_DevourAuthor

no harem but romance.

Daoist_Culture:I see nice babe on the cover, so I wonder if this is a harem 😎

1yr

Monarch_LordLv3

bruh chill

Swiftescape:Fake villain. Please remove tag.

12mth

dylan_pyleLv14

I had hope for something good like greed but my hope for crushed

11mth

Primordial_DevourAuthor

This is my first novel, even I wasn’t expecting it to be perfect when starting out.

dylan_pyle:I had hope for something good like greed but my hope for crushed
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MalfeitorLv4

Primordial_Devour:no harem but romance.

11mth

PXIGLv15

Dark mc?

10mth

Primordial_DevourAuthor

👍

PXIG:Dark mc?

10mth

JBFIRE_77Lv4

No romance it holds back the MC

10mth

Other Reviews

Supreme_IQLv4

A good plot story which could definitely be improved on. Keep reading and learning author, and don't forget to always take in fresh perspectives.

1yr

Supremeking92Lv12

This novels has lots of potential, I hope the author doesn’t drop it too soon like most new authors do. I can’t too much about the world building because it’s too early to judge. However the author created a mini arch to introduce the Mc and how he handles things, showing that the MC is smart and manipulative, and he would do anything to get what he wants. As for the writing quality… it’s ok, I can understand that the author must have recently started to upload his story, I hope the author improves his writing quality as he uploads.

1yr

RaphisLv3

"You do a good job in portraying the chaotic world of Azreak. The way you describe tragedy and conflict is easily understandable and quite acceptable. I also like the main character's nature; they are calm and act impulsively. However, in action, it's still lacking in epic and thrilling moments. But perhaps it's because there are still only a few chapters. Overall, it's tidy and good."

1yr

Monarch_LordLv3

A hidden gem for sure ( always wanted to say that keke ) The novel is really good, the backstory before the mc reincarnates is very cool as it allows us to understand his personality more, and the story flows really well too. Definitely shouldn't miss out on this!!

12mth

SkyfailLv15

Very promising so far. As expected of something inspired by Greed. You did a good job by making it different enough. World building seems interesting but we don't know enough yet. The spelling mistakes seem to get less and less. Some parts definitely sound weird so there's room for improvement. The only problem I have so far are about that Gu Teng and Shi Liang and Shi Hengshan or however they were called. They seemed more like teenagers instead of 400 year old geniuses of some great clan. I guess they are rather young in the grand scheme but in my opinion their clans are doomed if that's some of the best fresh blood they have.Anyways keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to when the action starts.

1yr

ArkonKnightLv3

It’s very good it’s kept me entertained and is interesting the world building is solid the mc has a good past to get to know him a little. Im thankful this is not a gotta catch them all harem. Please don’t drop this I think you have a lot of potential in this novel🙏.

10mth

Janis_JeplinLv1

i love evil mc, gambatte autor-san. please don´t leave the novel. ;D

10mth

DaoistqUzkLaLv3

Reveal spoiler

10mth

BidentheboboLv1

Hello, I've created a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage -> (Ze nithnovels), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!

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