Primordial_Devour

bro, it wasn't even that good. That was my first novel, and I consider it trash. this was an embarrassment to my current self. If you want to continue reading it, I'll put it back.

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I’m too busy with school and work so when I have a lot of free time, I’ll probably come back.

You’ll understand later.

This is my first novel, even I wasn’t expecting it to be perfect when starting out.

I am down to negotiate. Just tell me what part of the chapter you were unsatisfied with.

I added that in there just to make drama.

bro read a little further, I explained why. And if you think about the reasoning does make a little sense.

Lol

Don’t worry, the concept would be the same but I will try to improve on the grammar.