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HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor1yr
2023-11-05 00:51

Hm... Fantasy battle, smart MC, smart heroins, supper plot twist...etc... are all things that... this novel doesn't have. This place only has... Stupid MC, Normal heroins, normal plot, slice of life and... some sh*t thing. I just want to write what I want no matter how bad it is. ( ' 3') .... Why I rate this sh*t book 5 stars? Because its my book (b ᵔ ▽ ᵔ) b

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Neon_SsX
Neon_SsXLv15

Have you dropped your other novels??

Santy_Melay
Santy_MelayLv1

It seems that the author is stupid too.

HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor

Of course, I just a stupid author <(")

Santy_Melay:It seems that the author is stupid too.
_Human_
_Human_Lv4

what about APOCALYPSE CHAOS I AM VILLAIN

AshburnDz
AshburnDzLv13

Yeah "I stupid"

HikaruKiki:Of course, I just a stupid author <(")
Listlessthomas
ListlessthomasLv14

You forgot to add indecisive mc to that list

Cruel_Death
Cruel_DeathLv3

HikaruKiki:Of course, I just a stupid author <(")
Mhay_xxi
Mhay_xxiLv6

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Mhay_xxi
Mhay_xxiLv6

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Joethedeath
JoethedeathLv15

are there lemons author-san

HikaruKiki
HikaruKikiAuthor

Of course, yessss!!!!

Joethedeath:are there lemons author-san
Joethedeath
JoethedeathLv15

the i suppose... i'll give it a shot

Mhay_xxi
Mhay_xxiLv6

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Mhay_xxi
Mhay_xxiLv6

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Alejandro_Plaza
Alejandro_PlazaLv13

You abandoned your other novels? Especially Apocalypse chaos - I am the villain?

HikaruKiki:Of course, yessss!!!!
Drew_D_0158
Drew_D_0158Lv13

Alec is a brat .. lathel is spineless .. and the fmc are all in love with him even thought he can’t have them .. everything seems pointless

_Human_
_Human_Lv4

Chaos I villain update ????????????

Ku4Ayami
Ku4AyamiLv4

it's getting annoying to read this. i quit i cant tolerate how mc is always getting pushed around by the fmc

KRPL
KRPLLv14

Then is there Yuri?

HikaruKiki:Of course, yessss!!!!
Chovwe_Mayone_7988
Chovwe_Mayone_7988Lv3

Very True

Drew_D_0158:Alec is a brat .. lathel is spineless .. and the fmc are all in love with him even thought he can’t have them .. everything seems pointless
Other Reviews
Not_SkeleBlade
Not_SkeleBladeLv15

I found the premise of the story slightly intriguing. At the beginning, I see some characters could be the Yandere type, both the dangerous, and the loyal. As the story progressed there are some issues that I have, not enough to drop, but also enough to consider dropping. My first issue is the MC being incapable of saying no to beautiful women who cry. If a woman threatens your safety, doesn’t listen to you, and generally ignores what you want and you proceed to tell them off the waterworks start and the MC immediately apologizes. I find this kind of spineless. My next issue is the fact that the MC says one thing, but then does another. For example, the MC says he was to avoid being in situations where he would run into a protagonist, or be on their bad side, but then steals opportunities from the MC or does things that brings the protagonists attention onto him. An example of this was when the MC purposefully enters into a building where the protagonist is in and then shows himself in front of said person. This dude is suppose to avoid them, but instead goes head first into danger. There are some other issues but much smaller in scale. I do not see myself continuing to read this story if the entire plots revolves around an MC who gets dragged around by women and continues to put himself at odds with the protagonist. I will also mention, I have no problems with the MC being a good guy. I do have an issue with the MC having interactions with a heroine. The author specifically states the MC will die if he steals a protagonists women, yet causes the heroine to fall in love with the MC and constantly flirts. It’s kind of like being constantly blue balled, or die if you try anything.

Im_Him
Im_HimLv4
Sheyon
SheyonLv14

The novel is good and promising im the first few chapter (give or take less than 100 chap) but, it went downhill after that. (i already read around 200+ chap so my review will contain some spoiler) The overall of this novel is not bad, if only you can tolerate MC who the only reedeming characteristics about him is a good guy (like average japanese isekai novel). He want to help people as much as he can, heck he event help a protagonist who clearly hate him and want to kill him. Speaking of the MC he was also a bit hypocrite. He said he wants to help people if he can and be a little light for this world but, he always helping a protagonist who only cause harm to the world. From how spineless he was i'm ok if didn't do anything about the bad protagonist but no, He want to glorify him at ever single moment and help him if he can even though he clearly causing harm to other people. Bruh where is his good type character thinking at that moment?? it's magically gone. Even though the Author reapetedly saying the good type protagonist not too liked in this time and reader only like dark type protagonist but, if you only make an MC who's only being good when it didn't involved problem from a protagonist how will we like him if he is this hypocrite?? Author also make Heroine intrested in MC too fast. i was okay when the Heroine is reincarnation from the world before, but how the other interested in him also at the same speed? The moment they hear MC name like a hypnotize person they intrested and some way or another they want to have intimate time with him? Like bruh what the f**k. It really facing the same problem with generic Japanese isekai novel where the Heroine like MC just because he was a little nice. Still at the same problem he has a system where he can't even touch said Heroine unless he get rap*d. So yeah don't expect a smut chapter in this one. The other bad thing author did was make MC want a Harem and at every posible time shove every woment who was not a Heroine but clearly interested in him away. I don't know why he want to make him warry of every women and not with a dark type protagonist who's clearly he knows will hold grude until his enemy died and only hold a good thinking about him. Bruh the reader is tired of the stupid and spineless MC who keep imaging a bad protagonist like some ultimate chad (i was wondering did he recieved cuckold fetish because of his cheating wive from his previous life)

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