Hm... Fantasy battle, smart MC, smart heroins, supper plot twist...etc... are all things that... this novel doesn't have. This place only has... Stupid MC, Normal heroins, normal plot, slice of life and... some sh*t thing. I just want to write what I want no matter how bad it is. ( ' 3') .... Why I rate this sh*t book 5 stars? Because its my book (b ᵔ ▽ ᵔ) b

I found the premise of the story slightly intriguing. At the beginning, I see some characters could be the Yandere type, both the dangerous, and the loyal. As the story progressed there are some issues that I have, not enough to drop, but also enough to consider dropping. My first issue is the MC being incapable of saying no to beautiful women who cry. If a woman threatens your safety, doesn’t listen to you, and generally ignores what you want and you proceed to tell them off the waterworks start and the MC immediately apologizes. I find this kind of spineless. My next issue is the fact that the MC says one thing, but then does another. For example, the MC says he was to avoid being in situations where he would run into a protagonist, or be on their bad side, but then steals opportunities from the MC or does things that brings the protagonists attention onto him. An example of this was when the MC purposefully enters into a building where the protagonist is in and then shows himself in front of said person. This dude is suppose to avoid them, but instead goes head first into danger. There are some other issues but much smaller in scale. I do not see myself continuing to read this story if the entire plots revolves around an MC who gets dragged around by women and continues to put himself at odds with the protagonist. I will also mention, I have no problems with the MC being a good guy. I do have an issue with the MC having interactions with a heroine. The author specifically states the MC will die if he steals a protagonists women, yet causes the heroine to fall in love with the MC and constantly flirts. It’s kind of like being constantly blue balled, or die if you try anything.

The mc was just getting pushed around by fmc, he says he will avoid the protagonist but ultimately get closer to him on his on accord

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Hello. Is there any kind of yuri here? I hate that stuff and would like to know before reading thanks 😁

Went into the purchase chapters about 78 and honestly everything became a "why did he punk out?", "Why did he give in?", "Why did he initiate this interaction?", "For the love of god say no and walk away?" became my thoughts after every interaction. WQ in the paid section starts to get Gender Pronoun challenged pretty hard core and sentences are missing the subject or the content. Story Dev and Character design go hand in hand honestly. I do like how the author point fun at all the stupid MCs with plot armor cliche with Alec, but after the first interaction with Alec Lathel honestly becomes just barely more intelligent. Unfortunately Lathel has no spine, nuts, or ability to say no and stick to it. As other said he says he wants to get some girls explore, and avoid the Protag Alec...Yet first meet up after the wood scene Lathel goes out of his way to initiate a meeting with Alec.. Then proceeds to insult and slap his face in front of a whole tower of people. As the chapters after that state" The first Heroine shows up, and instead of avoiding her (who she is all about getting Lathel), he acquiesce to her over and over cause he has no spine to stand up for what he wants.

im on ch 81 and the story just feel repeative and annoying to read

MC is a literal damsel in distress with nothing in his control and all he does is shout lines along the lines "no dont this its bad." but no one listens to his whining. Also the characters and story is written in such a 1 dimensional way, the type you would expect from a children's story book. Example, there's this minion race who is dying because their is no food to eat but they won't hunt animals for food since they worship Nature goddess. Then our MC comes in and says "Bruh, hunting is also a cycle of nature so it's not blasphemy to kill animals for food", that's all it took for the minions to change their believe, Goddess makes MC god of nature. What is this nursery story writing.

What a great way to start off a story! I almost couldn't stop myself from reading! The characters and settings are well made it was almost perfect. I definitely would recommend reading this book! Great work, author. More chapters!