King_Yosh

Too short, thats a downer

Great start. But i also think the flashback scene was awkward? How it was written or how it is structured, i feel its awkward. Thats just my opinion tho

Haha dont cry. I would have forgotten this already if you didnt reply. Also credit the orig author you thief.

All that character background only to end up as a rocket grunt. Pass

He acts as if hes concerned. He moves only for profit. He wont actively hunt them. I dare say he would even help them because theres profit to gain there too.

I wish I didnt read the mtl lol. Same old op mc in the next 3 hundred chapters, just that he really become an asshole. Really disappointing. Xiao. Probably my last translated chapter.

Thats one of a hell to start a story. I hope this isnt grimdark lol

Glad this isnt like other underdog stories where just because their starter is rattata or zigzagoon that they just use non popular pokemon to prove a point. No matter how you trained a rattata or diglett or skitty for years, youre gonna have a hell of a time beating a young dragonite, or charizard.

I think I like where this is going. A team centered on strategy. I only hope rattata by then raticate would just also be a beast of a raticate. Swordsdance, hyperbeam, attract, giga impact, final gambit, super fang, hyper fang, endeavor, double edge, subsitute, rest, sleep talk. Shes gonna be a suicidal battler type isnt she, high risk high return.

If i remember, sentrets and furrets prey on rat pokemon.