Osas_Destiny_4852

I like the fanfic but it will be more good if there were less complaining in this fanfic like I feel this fanfic is more about hachiman complaining about how this world doesn't make sense and the logic to but his ability doesn't make any sense in this world at all and like that stupid and waste of the fanfic like what the point of it if he's own ability doesn't make sense either

+1

Is a good concept keep going

not all magic because if you kwon about Naruto is that Sharingan has limitations one of them is that it can't not copy bloodline ability so they goes for magic because there all different races all together and the way use is specific to there race he can only copy human magic and same with Genjutsu because it needs chraka pathways to work different race different concept of magic specifically for them to use and work and also the MC or Itachi affinity is also a limitation to and how my understanding of the template system of this fanfic works the mc will awaken chakra no magic

+1 because it's a better option than the other two because most people forget to the Sharingan is out side of chakra is usleless most of the time out side the perception and the ability to copy Taijutsu and Susan and Amaterasu some other techniques that depend on the chakra of the user is ok but copy Ninjutsu is impossible because magic is a different concept all together and Genjutsu is impossible to because the opponent most have tenkesu or chakra pathways to even work in the first place and because Minato is a sealing master with Uzumaki sealing techniques and his power are more versatile because it has multiple uses and because the flying thunder god technique is one of the few space-time Ninjutsu that can give the MC the ability to travel between dimensions he will needs this ability because all the supernatural are in different dimensions or pocket dimensions outside the human world to travel and to travel around the world

Is not that i will not like it when he joins Luffy is just is was cool concept that he was solo adventures because the fanfic that i find for the most is the MC joins Luffy, the marines and prevent most of the plot in one piece like preventing Luffy for becoming a pirate or the MC stealing Luffy crew before he became a pirate or built a harem and so on that is lame in some point is like the running of ideas at this point and most of the are Chinese fanfic and is like what wrong with MC the moment the enter in the the one piece world they have Beff with everything and anything and have op system and Cheats and system with weird fetishes or MC him self with weird fetishes the snatch every waifu like Pokemon and More not only one piece the are others to but I'm ok with this fanfic is ok and interesting not like most MC in one piece fanfic

If he joins Luffy it contradict his goal of going home and it will make sense if he just make his own crew because he has a different goal then Luffy and because it get boring and some point like is just like most fanfic when the MC joins Luffy like it will better to make his own crew of treasure hunters with new characters and different adventures and just make it like Law and Kid where Hikigaya im some arcs meets Luffy again and ideas for the crews like (Silk and Ann pilot characters and nami sister and the two bounty hunters that used to follow Zoro ) because it will be interesting and think because some people will join his crew because how he his

The only problem is that she hates being X anime and manga and maybe some gods because of the manga but not all and the problem is that the Gods in danmachi don't interfere that much is just the see or create Heros and being X was forcing her to believe or to pray to him so the are fundamentally different from Being X even if Being X is danmachi he can 't use his divine powers because how danmachi gods works heck like even all evil gods follows that rules and Tanya is not stupid she will notice the difference between the gods in danmachi and Being X

What's about the the Sign in Gacha did you dropped it or not

OK I am just asking