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saxmepapi
saxmepapiLv31yr
2024-01-24 15:27

Don't know anything about Eragon or its source material so I went into this completely blind but I'm surprised at how the author fleshed out the world in a manner that was easy to understand. The author especially does a good job fleshing out the characters and giving an insight into each characters thought process and the interactions between each character is unique and in general are fluid. I am around 38 chapters in and I'm invested in the mc's journey. (The journey towards unltimate power and finally getting a taste of the forbidden fruit that is the Dragussy?) Anyways I'm looking forward to where this story goes and hope you publish regular chapters and not drop the story. 🙏

Instead of Arya, I prefer her mom (Eragon)

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TempestDrift
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imagine being in eragon and not getting dragon and reason being stupid like not liking dragons when its power up like brah ....................................

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f0Ri5
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I'll give it a good rating, because if I do, more people might read it. And also, I don't have anything else to say, but I need more words before I can post this. Done, finally.

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demonic_archon
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BlackFun
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There is not much to say since there are only 5 chapters. The Eragon setting is interesting and I like that the focus is on magic.The Mc is bit too stubborn and if it was not for plot he would probably kill himself every other day cause he wants to learn magic without any kind of support. Admirable but probably very stupid cause one mistake with this kind of magic and you are dead...

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Dave_Guest
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Great story so far. I Hope it stays intresting and the author makes the story independent and unique even without following the whole plot.

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Cha0sTheory
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It started strong, but there is so much fanfic protagonist nonsense, that I'm wondering why even bother setting in this particular universe. Could have just made it a stand alone story, idk will read a few more chapters before deciding to continue/drop.

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Prince_Blueblood
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Gud stuff...btw I ship MC and Saphira

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It's a really good story all things considered.

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