Read what was free for a reference point: writing quality is good as far as grammar goes. Can use some editing to fix small mistakes and clarify things better. At times the same thing is repeated over and over adding no new details to further the story just the word count. World building is going slow but progressing but at the same time a lot of details are skipped or glossed over in my opinion. The main character has no developments yet as far as getting attached or invested in his adventure for answers. Wish he would have eaten someone by now or at least used his new skill. New story so it’s hard to speak about update stability but there isn’t over 50 chapters yet. Wish the writer luck with their story
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I appreciate your interests, thank you I'll do better
The 'eating someone' are already there, so enjoy
Not eating someone that is alive and making a zombie he has not at least not in the free chapters
If the novels not to your taste, try out my other novel. Villain: Rebirth of the shadow lord I'm sure it would be more of your style.
The chapters are going to be free, until it reaches 40
When it hits 50 chapters I’ll read it thanks
ok, that would take about a month period
It’s on my to read list I like to binge watch/ read so I’ll keep an eye out to see when I should start reading
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