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Sean_Morabito
Sean_MorabitoLv141yr
2023-11-30 16:19

I was excited for another SCP Novel, given the abandoned state of current ones, and the storyline involving base building and systems is promising. However, the reading experience is hindered by confusing language, a journal-like writing style for some of the main character's experiences, a few overly long paragraphs, and numerous poorly-worded sentences. The prevalence of grammar mistakes is overwhelming, with one chapter containing over 50 on a single page. It's evident the author lacks proper proofreading, neglecting tools like Grammarly or ChatGPT. This oversight detracts from the immersive quality of the story, forcing me to give it a disappointing 2.5 stars, despite its potential for a higher rating if not for the numerous errors.-S.M.

SCP: The Unforseen Variable (Old)

Whadyamean
4.4
50 Chs

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Sean_Morabito
Sean_MorabitoLv14

When you advertise your own Book that is about something completely unrelated to this one, lol.

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Whadyamean
WhadyameanAuthor

I read your review go “yeah that makes sense. See two comments and I see someone advertising in the comments on the reviews on my fic. *My reaction

Sean_Morabito:When you advertise your own Book that is about something completely unrelated to this one, lol.
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Sean_Morabito
Sean_MorabitoLv14

lol

Whadyamean:I read your review go “yeah that makes sense. See two comments and I see someone advertising in the comments on the reviews on my fic. *My reaction
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Whadyamean
WhadyameanAuthor

I like SCP and find that for such a huge world it dosen’t get enough love. The book is set up with plotpoints that will be adressed if even 100 chapters later, I’m in it for the long haul.

1yr

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5

not bad but not for me. I feel like this is not written to be a 'novel' it is more of a 'journal', which makes it really hard for me to keep reading.

1yr
Shang_D_Shiran
Shang_D_ShiranLv4

luckily this isn't a week day other wise i would be sleep deprived due to how much i loved this, i would say one of the things to improve on is character description like a picture (ai generation is ok) other than that i shall now get sleep... cuz i need it it's mid night. other than that i love this ill be supporting this whenever.

1yr
DaoistyhmT6N
DaoistyhmT6NLv4

while i think the story is good the writing quality is not as good as it could be

1yr
Cindy_Davis_5782
Cindy_Davis_5782Lv1

best scp fic I've seen in forever rest is to send ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

1yr
the_reaver
the_reaverLv14

amazing book quality isn't the best but I'm here for the story and it delivers I recommend it to everyone who likes SCP and thank you for the work author.

1yr
Pingvinchik
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peg_leg
peg_legLv11

gem.

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Outer_God_Azathoth
Outer_God_AzathothLv1

Great SCP Story, it's been a while since I read one.

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