Item: SCP: The Unforseen Variable (Old)
Rating: 4.8
Author: Shang_D_Shiran

Shang_D_ShiranLv41yr

2023-11-24 20:13

luckily this isn't a week day other wise i would be sleep deprived due to how much i loved this, i would say one of the things to improve on is character description like a picture (ai generation is ok) other than that i shall now get sleep... cuz i need it it's mid night. other than that i love this ill be supporting this whenever.

SCP: The Unforseen Variable (Old)

Whadyamean

4.4

50 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies2

Shang_D_ShiranLv4

star rating was 4.8 not 4

1yr

WhadyameanAuthor

Yeah should probably make a picture of sorts. Will probably make a auxiliary chapter. Anyway thanks! :D

1yr

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PsyLoRDLv5

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DaoistyhmT6NLv4

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Cindy_Davis_5782Lv1

best scp fic I've seen in forever rest is to send ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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the_reaverLv14

amazing book quality isn't the best but I'm here for the story and it delivers I recommend it to everyone who likes SCP and thank you for the work author.

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PingvinchikLv1

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