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Rebel_Royal5
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2023-10-26 08:20

a great story over all I'd change nothing but one thing longer chapters

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Benoit_Valtin
Benoit_ValtinLv11

What are you talking about, it's just the original script, there are no changes, the only difference is that Shane is less annoying and a pedophile

Rebel_Royal5
Rebel_Royal5Lv14

how is he a pedo

Benoit_Valtin:What are you talking about, it's just the original script, there are no changes, the only difference is that Shane is less annoying and a pedophile
mixedSaint
mixedSaintLv4

i agree. the story is great however longer chapters and maybe some more interactions with the characters to show the relationships develop. or devise custom scenes for different characters to interact with the MC to learn a lesson, or explore their backstory and deepen their bond. otherwise i think it’s great

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