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TossingShadeLv145mth
2024-08-29 07:21

To start off with the first twenty five ish chapters have terrible writing quality, if you can’t make it past that I totally get it, but there are some redeeming points. The plot and MC of the fanfic are pretty good. The new 10 shadows are interesting and the writing quality is excellent after the shitty portion. There’s also realistic responses to MC instead of him having no real effect on the world before he starts changing the story. The author handles the absent father part well whilst giving the MC a reason to leave even if it’s not the best. In summary, it’s a good fic once you get to the point where the writing quality increases. Hope the author updates it more often.

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