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ZRUSQAAuthor1yr
2024-02-12 09:10

hey guys after ch 23 the words gets better after I re read my novel i thought to my self that my writing sucks so i rely on chatgpt to make it better but don't worry I only just made chatgpt use some fancy words and correct the spelling on my story so rest assured that the story is not AI generated

I got reborn as megumi's older brother

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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

harem members??

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PokemonJoker
PokemonJokerLv3

The writing quality is just really bad from how it is written to spelling and grammar mistakes

1yr

_DEKIM_
_DEKIM_Lv1

It had the potential to be very good but it has a lot of bad points. So this novel is meh😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

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Supper_mega
Supper_megaLv4

it has potential but what particular thing I don't like is sometimes the chapters are short so I guess that's all I can say for now...

1yr
average_ff_enjoyr
average_ff_enjoyrLv4

this had so much potential, i loved the new ten shadows technique, and i loved the premise, but every thing else was lacking the plot was forced the interactions between the characters was iffy... i just couldn't continue reading it .

8mth
Mister_Robot
Mister_RobotLv4

Reveal spoiler

9mth
i_like_catwoman
i_like_catwomanLv4

it's a great idea for jjk fan fic , but I hope you can make a chapter consisting of mc and his shikigami abilities and have it updated per chapter

1yr
Prem_Sanjai
Prem_SanjaiLv4

The idea for this story was great and it had lot of potential but sadly the author didn't deliver it well.The grammar and writing structure of this story is horrendous,the chapters are rushed and the characters feel like they are emotionless puppets.

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TossingShade
TossingShadeLv14

To start off with the first twenty five ish chapters have terrible writing quality, if you can’t make it past that I totally get it, but there are some redeeming points. The plot and MC of the fanfic are pretty good. The new 10 shadows are interesting and the writing quality is excellent after the shitty portion. There’s also realistic responses to MC instead of him having no real effect on the world before he starts changing the story. The author handles the absent father part well whilst giving the MC a reason to leave even if it’s not the best. In summary, it’s a good fic once you get to the point where the writing quality increases. Hope the author updates it more often.

7mth
Ab_Maxz
Ab_MaxzLv12

Why are it's first few chapters the same as Jjk: Dust release?

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