Item: I got reborn as megumi's older brother
Rating: 3.8
Author: Supper_mega

Supper_megaLv410mth

2024-01-09 17:19

it has potential but what particular thing I don't like is sometimes the chapters are short so I guess that's all I can say for now...

I got reborn as megumi's older brother

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hey guys after ch 23 the words gets better after I re read my novel i thought to my self that my writing sucks so i rely on chatgpt to make it better but don't worry I only just made chatgpt use some fancy words and correct the spelling on my story so rest assured that the story is not AI generated

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