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2024-02-26 03:25

If you can get over the hurdle of there being 2 transmigrators (mc/tenten, naruto/love interest) then the story is nice for a while. That’s until the mc/tenten gets nerfed/poisoned and from what I see she hides it from naruto and everyone for a long time, it happens around chapter 53-54 and it still hasn’t been resolved. I personally can’t read a nerf like this that doesn’t get resolved quickly. Author has commented saying it’s for “character development” Ontop of that the author has been heavily hinting that the mc will die in the future, I have no problem with that, but the problem I have is that the mc just accepts it and doesn’t care that she is going to die in the future. She doesn’t want to fight for survival. I still recommend reading the first 50 chapters though since this is one of the rare fem mc fanfics who isn’t yuri

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