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primodial
primodialAuthor1yr
2023-12-15 02:21

finally leaving a review, this is a work I've poured my heart into, a last push for greatness if you'd call it that. I ask for you patience as the book is a bit slow. I assure you, the pace is necessary and everything happens for a reason. feel free to ask questions down below

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DraconicHuman
DraconicHumanLv11

hello is the mc villain or antihero ???

primodial
primodialAuthor

vilian sounds edgy..I'd say he's styled after fang yuan.

DraconicHuman:hello is the mc villain or antihero ???
That_Annoying_guy
That_Annoying_guyLv4

How many is in the harem?

primodial:vilian sounds edgy..I'd say he's styled after fang yuan.
Ancient_
Ancient_Lv14

Did you really say, "novel won't progress in the same why other novels are progressing, if you don't like unique development then maybe this isn't the novel for you" while it's the most generic carbon copy of every single novel of this genre 😂😂🤣🤣

primodial
primodialAuthor

what chapter did you get to BTW?

Ancient_:Did you really say, "novel won't progress in the same why other novels are progressing, if you don't like unique development then maybe this isn't the novel for you" while it's the most generic carbon copy of every single novel of this genre 😂😂🤣🤣
Hardy1j
Hardy1jLv14

So, you mean edgy?

primodial:vilian sounds edgy..I'd say he's styled after fang yuan.
Behzod
BehzodLv14

Academy arc?

primodial
primodialAuthor

I don't have plans for one tbh......but you never know.

Behzod:Academy arc?
Nah_I_shall_pirate
Nah_I_shall_pirateLv3

unlock it until 60 bro

primodial
primodialAuthor

can't, it's permanent.

Nah_I_shall_pirate:unlock it until 60 bro
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Nah_I_shall_pirate
Nah_I_shall_pirateLv3

ig I shall become pirate then😔, its peak novel BTW 🗣

primodial:can't, it's permanent.
Nah_I_shall_pirate
Nah_I_shall_pirateLv3

I'm at chapter 45 gimme some coins and I shall answer ur questions.🗣

DraconicHuman:hello is the mc villain or antihero ???
Nah_I_shall_pirate
Nah_I_shall_pirateLv3

that is the best thing u could have said dear author

primodial:vilian sounds edgy..I'd say he's styled after fang yuan.
Amine_Akkouche
Amine_AkkoucheLv4

Did u really need to make it a harem ?

DraconicHuman
DraconicHumanLv11

Is there a romance?

primodial:vilian sounds edgy..I'd say he's styled after fang yuan.
primodial
primodialAuthor

barely......I don't know if that counts as romance tbh.

DraconicHuman:Is there a romance?
Test_Misc
Test_MiscLv4

harem? yuri? NTR?

Nekomiko_succubus
Nekomiko_succubusLv11

harem?

primodial:barely......I don't know if that counts as romance tbh.
Sani_Ahmad_4503
Sani_Ahmad_4503Lv3

there's a harem tag, but it's not quite like the usual harem in my opinion.

Nekomiko_succubus:harem?
Troxking
TroxkingLv15

How’s it not like the usual harem?

Sani_Ahmad_4503:there's a harem tag, but it's not quite like the usual harem in my opinion.
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