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Mattgz
MattgzLv111yr
2023-10-23 04:11

Hola Autor. Porfavor agregar elementos de harem y r18. También espero las habilidades de Gojo Satoru. Y agregar algunas magias auxiliares para evitar los mismos errores de Satoru. Donde donar? Para no dejar caido.

Fairy Tail: Satoru Gojo

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4.5
13 Chs

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Emmanuel_Capricorn
Emmanuel_CapricornLv4

there is overpowered tag but 6 chapters in and the MC does not even know he is Gojo and the best he could do his let his body feel warmth and get strong. Author should put weak to strong instead of overpowered.Or am JIwrong becauseI read this in the middle of the night in a hurry and I'm sleepy

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Rain_2207
Rain_2207Lv1

Continue please, the idea is great, the implementation is very interesting, keep writing, you are doing well, good luck to you, more inspiration 🙂

1yr
EnryuFic
EnryuFicLv1

5 stars for the idea itself, which no one has realized yet, hope you can do it, good luck to you............................................

1yr
AlHiLit
AlHiLitLv1

It goes well with beer. Hope you will continue this fanfick and will be popular......................................please give me money!!!

1yr
dfkin_white
dfkin_whiteLv4

the only thing that bothers me is the length of the description and explanation of scenes . If you could try to tone it down, it would be a huge plus

1yr
evil_follo
evil_folloLv1

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Spelloyal
SpelloyalLv12

It's an interesting fic with the potential to become a good story, but several small problems that are so basic that they shouldn't be there detract from the reading. The most notable of these problems is that the author uses quotation marks for both speeches and thoughts, which sometimes makes it confusing to know whether the MC is speaking or thinking. Another problem are moments when the plot is forced, like when Cana looks at the MC when she meets him and he immediately asks her out on a date. It's not illogical, but the way all the development occurs in two paragraphs makes it strange, forced and uninteresting. Sudden and somewhat forced developments like this are common in this fic.

1yr
Gohar_Iqbal_0964
Gohar_Iqbal_0964Lv4

Nice story idea very interesting don't drop it and plz keep the chapters posted in a regular manner it's a request

1yr
iETTEL
iETTELLv1

Good enough, i like it very much. Good luck to the author so that he can continue to delight readers with such a wonderful story, also I wish him inspiration and more free time to continue this story.

1yr
dfkin_white
dfkin_whiteLv4

it's becoming increasingly harder to read this . I was actually hoping the author could fix his writing . long chapters with long explanations that are useless for the plot

1yr
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