Continue please, the idea is great, the implementation is very interesting, keep writing, you are doing well, good luck to you, more inspiration 🙂

5 stars for the idea itself, which no one has realized yet, hope you can do it, good luck to you............................................

It goes well with beer. Hope you will continue this fanfick and will be popular......................................please give me money!!!

the only thing that bothers me is the length of the description and explanation of scenes . If you could try to tone it down, it would be a huge plus

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It's an interesting fic with the potential to become a good story, but several small problems that are so basic that they shouldn't be there detract from the reading. The most notable of these problems is that the author uses quotation marks for both speeches and thoughts, which sometimes makes it confusing to know whether the MC is speaking or thinking. Another problem are moments when the plot is forced, like when Cana looks at the MC when she meets him and he immediately asks her out on a date. It's not illogical, but the way all the development occurs in two paragraphs makes it strange, forced and uninteresting. Sudden and somewhat forced developments like this are common in this fic.

Nice story idea very interesting don't drop it and plz keep the chapters posted in a regular manner it's a request

Good enough, i like it very much. Good luck to the author so that he can continue to delight readers with such a wonderful story, also I wish him inspiration and more free time to continue this story.

it's becoming increasingly harder to read this . I was actually hoping the author could fix his writing . long chapters with long explanations that are useless for the plot