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2023-10-12 07:01

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Honestly, it feels like simple wish fulfillment. Descently written, but the mc just decides random things with very little actual logic behind it. And then the story deffends it as if they were actually logical and well thought out choices. Honestly, i think that you need to like OP main characters and to be okay with him being hypocritic to truly enjoy this. ----- The MC is a super OP dragon that keeps achieving everything because his super powerful and fast, with weird random magic. But the story acts as if he is wise and smart and people will follow him because of that,even though we dont see any of that. Just him using his OPness to achieve everything. Aside form that, the mc just decides things with basically no logic, but the plot will tell you that he is right. Like he decides to suport the Targaryen since the beginning because they are the only ones that can rule, for some reason. And then the story just plays along. He does a few less than questionable things at times, but then he will act like he has some kind of moral high ground to stand on, and as always, the plot and characters play along. --- Aside from that, The orignal characters have their own personalities and can be interesting, but basically all of them worship everything the mc does. --- When it comes to the events from orignal timeline, is weird. Early on he does something that should change everything, but the events still play like cannon, even though i makes no sense. Later on he does change cannon, but we see him making weird moral judgments in which he treats some gray characters as good and forgivable, while other gray characters are unforgivable monsters because he says so. --- And later the author starts to add new tings, probably to give the mc some kind of challenge. But i dont know how good or bad that ends up being.

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