eh, not for me. its well written, but i just personally didnt like any of the plot developments. interfering with such random events, the newborn dragons so early, and just a generally really weird outlook on other characters. idk, it was just annoying to read personally cuz I wouldnt like any of the mcs actions or even thoughts

the best advice I can give to new writers like you is to set yourself a specific goal, for example. 1 new episode per week one new episode for every 100 power stones (if the story hits a dead end or things don't go the way you want, make sure you time jump directly and finish the story, it will be appreciated more than an unfinished story

It’s a fantastic story; it shows a different side of the typical Game of Thrones/House of the Dragon story. We even get to see Yi-Ti, that’s not quite common in other stories that only show Westeros and Essos. I can’t wait to see more about our mighty dragon king Bahamut Keep up the excellent work 🔥🐲🔥

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Honestly, it feels like simple wish fulfillment. Descently written, but the mc just decides random things with very little actual logic behind it. And then the story deffends it as if they were actually logical and well thought out choices. Honestly, i think that you need to like OP main characters and to be okay with him being hypocritic to truly enjoy this. ----- The MC is a super OP dragon that keeps achieving everything because his super powerful and fast, with weird random magic. But the story acts as if he is wise and smart and people will follow him because of that,even though we dont see any of that. Just him using his OPness to achieve everything. Aside form that, the mc just decides things with basically no logic, but the plot will tell you that he is right. Like he decides to suport the Targaryen since the beginning because they are the only ones that can rule, for some reason. And then the story just plays along. He does a few less than questionable things at times, but then he will act like he has some kind of moral high ground to stand on, and as always, the plot and characters play along. --- Aside from that, The orignal characters have their own personalities and can be interesting, but basically all of them worship everything the mc does. --- When it comes to the events from orignal timeline, is weird. Early on he does something that should change everything, but the events still play like cannon, even though i makes no sense. Later on he does change cannon, but we see him making weird moral judgments in which he treats some gray characters as good and forgivable, while other gray characters are unforgivable monsters because he says so. --- And later the author starts to add new tings, probably to give the mc some kind of challenge. But i dont know how good or bad that ends up being.

Fantastic story if you like dragons and world building! 10/10 would recommend.

Interesting take on dragons. Please tell me where you got your cover pic it's so cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

es un historia interesante solo tal ves pon un imagen o como es el prota que no se com se veria para mi es un verdadero dragon con cuatro estremidades de resto espero que lo sigas subiendo al menos una es al dia jajajaja pero esta buena la historia gracias

Nicely written but very boring. Average till chapter 10 and I still didn't understand what's the point of this fanfic as I didn't find it enjoyable to read nor anticipated the next chapter.