Please, if you're going to write in English, ensure that it's easy to understand. You might want to consider using tools like Grammarly or ChatGPT for assistance. I'm finding it difficult to follow the current text. Correcting the grammar and spelling will greatly enhance clarity. If you don't make these improvements, you may struggle to engage readers with your story. If you're not willing to make these changes, then perhaps writing in English might not be the best option

Much better. Why did you stop writing? But this is annoying. Why are you writing about a 6-year-old in a romantic relationship? It makes me feel sick. You could have made him older. How do people take him seriously? He's only 6 years old. People would think he's a demon taking over his body because he's in the world of demon slayer.

Finally!!! A very beautiful novel that I liked very much. The events of the novel, the scenarios, and the interaction of the different characters really impressed me. Seriously, I was very impressed. At the beginning, I was quite lost due to the initial chapters, which were a bit difficult to understand but still acceptable. What I liked afterward was that the author was constantly learning from writing, as I found that with each subsequent chapter, the writing was evolving significantly. This made me respect the author a lot. The only problem was just the slow updates of the chapters. I understand that the author is a student and also that this is the first time he has written a novel, which I think is evident to everyone in the initial chapters. But simply, the author's talent and his way of narrating events and different characters, and their way of speaking and dealing with things made me simply fall in love with this wonderful work, which I only found in a few novels. And most importantly, there is nothing racist. I mean, the author is writing a novel in the Chinese style, from which we have learned that there is a lot of poison that some of us have to sacrifice themselves if they die, then the novel is forbidden, and if they survive, they will explain to us the situation of the novel. But he is German, which I learned from some of his comments. His narration of worlds of power and beautiful and exciting fights is true. Although it's a harem, and I'm not a fan of harems, it's very beautiful. I liked the novel, and I hope the author can publish at least one chapter a week 😅

This novel is very good. The only problem is the slow release of chapters and the difficulty of the English language because there are very difficult words. But because the author-san was very kind to his readers and acknowledged that the difficulty of the words is hard, which made many chapters easier. Overall, thank you for your great effort, author-san.

Honestly, I liked this novel, but the author's pace in publishing chapters was very slow. It's good that I've read his comment now, saying he will publish every day. One of the author's advantages is learning. He's quick to learn. Anyone with a brain can say that each next chapter becomes better than the previous one, which shows how strong the author's learning capability is. The characters are simply very beautiful, the way they converse, the mystery of the world, the fight scenarios, and the way the story is explained to us. He's simply a great new artist on the scene.

story gets boring as it progresses. just ruined the story and character plot with harem.