Much better. Why did you stop writing? But this is annoying. Why are you writing about a 6-year-old in a romantic relationship? It makes me feel sick. You could have made him older. How do people take him seriously? He's only 6 years old. People would think he's a demon taking over his body because he's in the world of demon slayer.
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Firstly, Zak, thank you for showing appreciation for my novel. The reason I haven't completed the novel is primarily because I'm attending school and also have other commitments and appointments. However, this doesn't mean I've stopped writing. In fact, I've written several chapters, but I'm simplifying the concepts to ensure you all understand my writing. Regarding why the protagonist, KE, is 6 years old with a romantic relationship: KE has reincarnated, meaning in his previous life, he was 16 years old. He also possesses techniques to refine Etheora, which evolves living beings to a higher life form. KE is constantly evolving, but because he's very young and his body and origin cannot withstand the terrifying increase in power, Etheora accelerates the development of his body. Although he's 6, he has grown to be about 190 centimeters tall, and his mind is that of a 16-year-old. He doesn't need to abide by laws because he's a very powerful entity; human laws don't limit him but rather, he defines what human laws are. Remember, this era is around the year 1880—I've forgotten the exact year, but it's close to this. It's important to understand that age and morals become irrelevant if immortality is possible. Of course, I try to write the novel as realistically as possible.
I understand, but it's unsettling sigh just create a space-time power allowing him to stay there for a few years meditating while he changes, but the world outside does not. I feel really uncomfortable, and almost everyone would feel that way, even though you mention things like immortality. It doesn't change the fact that he's still 6 years old.
LAZYGUYNEARBY:Firstly, Zak, thank you for showing appreciation for my novel. The reason I haven't completed the novel is primarily because I'm attending school and also have other commitments and appointments. However, this doesn't mean I've stopped writing. In fact, I've written several chapters, but I'm simplifying the concepts to ensure you all understand my writing. Regarding why the protagonist, KE, is 6 years old with a romantic relationship: KE has reincarnated, meaning in his previous life, he was 16 years old. He also possesses techniques to refine Etheora, which evolves living beings to a higher life form. KE is constantly evolving, but because he's very young and his body and origin cannot withstand the terrifying increase in power, Etheora accelerates the development of his body. Although he's 6, he has grown to be about 190 centimeters tall, and his mind is that of a 16-year-old. He doesn't need to abide by laws because he's a very powerful entity; human laws don't limit him but rather, he defines what human laws are. Remember, this era is around the year 1880—I've forgotten the exact year, but it's close to this. It's important to understand that age and morals become irrelevant if immortality is possible. Of course, I try to write the novel as realistically as possible.
Alright, if that's what you want, I can do it, but it will take some time—about 20 chapters or less—because the writing will be delayed, and I need to change many scenarios and add a new one.
Jackleell:I understand, but it's unsettling sigh just create a space-time power allowing him to stay there for a few years meditating while he changes, but the world outside does not. I feel really uncomfortable, and almost everyone would feel that way, even though you mention things like immortality. It doesn't change the fact that he's still 6 years old.
