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2024-01-07 23:26

Story is interesting (hence the rating) but it is distracting when the maid who is the 2nd FL’s mom’s name (Cherry) is used in place of Eliana the FL. Also, randomly, people’s name change, sometimes in the same sentence! Good story but having to force my brain to insert the right name is annoying. Give it a try if you like puzzles while reading. Also skip chapter 19, it’s a repeat of 18!

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black_flowertrend
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can you please pinpoint my mistakes so that I can correct it. thanks alot for the review [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Snail435
Snail435Lv15

I thought this too, the names get switched around, or the main characters name is the other women’s name. The poor author needs a proof reader, before they publish the chapters

Daoist3XbAAb
Daoist3XbAAbLv3

the book got me captivated somehow.....when I started I thought I will abandon it after few days but I find myself staying up late just to read it.....the author did a very good job

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