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Vainglory0
Vainglory0Lv41yr
2023-10-27 02:15

As far as I have read(27 chapters), there is literally no problem with this novel. Everything is perfect and the novel is incredibly enjoyable. The writing quality is impeccable with no room for error and the story progression is stable with a steady pace. Apart from the MC, there haven't been many characters introduced yet but the ones introduced so far are definitely likable. The selling point of this novel is definitely the chat. The interaction between the viewers and Breeze and also the interaction between the viewers themselves is ever a fun treat. Overall assessment/ tl;dr: The novel is still in its beginning stages but it shows promise. In short, I would recommend this novel any day to anyone. Sure, it may not be a masterpiece, but it possesses a certain charm that captivates its readers and makes the engrossed in the work.

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PurpleEnigmas
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OK, so I don’t do reviews like ever, but this WebNovel needs to be recognized. 1) Imma start with the characters. Every character is very fun and relatable. we all have that “ one friend” who you can see in the characters. The interactions are also very fluid and organic, I wouldn’t be surprised if these convos happened in the real world. 2) Onto the world. so it is set in a futuristic world where earth has advanced like crazy. I won’t spoil too much and let you experience the vibe yourself. 3) OK a big one and might be a turn off for some, The system. To be honest, I don’t mind systems and even ones that add “ punishments”, but like the author has mentioned before the system is more of like a little bonus gift every now and then. Legit remove the system, and the MC is still a gamer who would accomplish his dreams with or without the system the system just speeds up the process. 4) Last but not least romance. OK, so here I am kind of torn the author has said only one girl will be with the MC in the end… and it’s tough cause I really like both love interests I am currently leaning more for Lily but Nina is just to precious as long as she’s happy I’m happy just don’t want a broken heart :( Anyways, I should wrap this up. It’s starting to look like an essay XD. Just give the book a shot if you enjoy content creators at all that streamers or Youtubers, I promise you will like this. My only gripe is there are two little chapters right now, in under one and a half days, I read through all of the privileged chapters up the max teir :/ keep up the awesome work author, here’s to many more chapters to go!

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