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OakFlameLv141yr
2023-10-12 02:16

What if someone who'd lost everything got a second chance? Seeing his last wish fulfilled and with a second shot at life, Breeze aims to make the best of it. Writing quality is perfection. Edited to a professional level, an amazing job here. Updates seem to be consistent. Story is interesting and it the plot looks to have a promising future. I really like Breeze as a character, and I love the chat. It reminds me slightly of the banter in Rise. Excellent. The world is well thought out and detailed, another great point. Great so far, give this book a read! (Author please release a bonus chap for me ;))

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Thank you for the review <3

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PurpleEnigmasLv15

OK, so I don’t do reviews like ever, but this WebNovel needs to be recognized. 1) Imma start with the characters. Every character is very fun and relatable. we all have that “ one friend” who you can see in the characters. The interactions are also very fluid and organic, I wouldn’t be surprised if these convos happened in the real world. 2) Onto the world. so it is set in a futuristic world where earth has advanced like crazy. I won’t spoil too much and let you experience the vibe yourself. 3) OK a big one and might be a turn off for some, The system. To be honest, I don’t mind systems and even ones that add “ punishments”, but like the author has mentioned before the system is more of like a little bonus gift every now and then. Legit remove the system, and the MC is still a gamer who would accomplish his dreams with or without the system the system just speeds up the process. 4) Last but not least romance. OK, so here I am kind of torn the author has said only one girl will be with the MC in the end… and it’s tough cause I really like both love interests I am currently leaning more for Lily but Nina is just to precious as long as she’s happy I’m happy just don’t want a broken heart :( Anyways, I should wrap this up. It’s starting to look like an essay XD. Just give the book a shot if you enjoy content creators at all that streamers or Youtubers, I promise you will like this. My only gripe is there are two little chapters right now, in under one and a half days, I read through all of the privileged chapters up the max teir :/ keep up the awesome work author, here’s to many more chapters to go!

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