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ShuriOc
ShuriOcLv11yr
2023-10-25 15:34

awesome novel!!!. IDK if people are reading my review or not but let me say something, its just awesome. read the first chapter and you'll like it. the novel is very simple, not confusing at all but, interesting at the same time. the grammar and stuff were easy to understand. and I didn't have to read it twice or thrice to understand it. IDK if i'm writing this right(the review). The main reason why I'm writing this review is so that the author gains some energy and posts more chapter.

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ShuviLily
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xD thank you for the review. I am glad you like it

ShuriOc
ShuriOcLv1

I should be thanking you for this amazing thing!!!, I'm waiting for you to release chapters. hope you do good with novel author.

ShuviLily:xD thank you for the review. I am glad you like it
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PurpleEnigmas
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OK, so I don’t do reviews like ever, but this WebNovel needs to be recognized. 1) Imma start with the characters. Every character is very fun and relatable. we all have that “ one friend” who you can see in the characters. The interactions are also very fluid and organic, I wouldn’t be surprised if these convos happened in the real world. 2) Onto the world. so it is set in a futuristic world where earth has advanced like crazy. I won’t spoil too much and let you experience the vibe yourself. 3) OK a big one and might be a turn off for some, The system. To be honest, I don’t mind systems and even ones that add “ punishments”, but like the author has mentioned before the system is more of like a little bonus gift every now and then. Legit remove the system, and the MC is still a gamer who would accomplish his dreams with or without the system the system just speeds up the process. 4) Last but not least romance. OK, so here I am kind of torn the author has said only one girl will be with the MC in the end… and it’s tough cause I really like both love interests I am currently leaning more for Lily but Nina is just to precious as long as she’s happy I’m happy just don’t want a broken heart :( Anyways, I should wrap this up. It’s starting to look like an essay XD. Just give the book a shot if you enjoy content creators at all that streamers or Youtubers, I promise you will like this. My only gripe is there are two little chapters right now, in under one and a half days, I read through all of the privileged chapters up the max teir :/ keep up the awesome work author, here’s to many more chapters to go!

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