Brainless harem SI. Bad writing bad grammar. No plot. Dumped.

After reading 6 chapters I decided to leave a review. This fanfic is great although I think the development in the beginning is a bit fast but that doesn't make it bad. I give you 5 stars buddy. If things continue at this pace I think the fanfic will be very successful.

for now 5 stars before reading hoping for no bloated harems that may impact storytelling...

This has become my top 3 favorite fanfic. So, pls dont give up on it no matter what even when some dumba**es write negative comments about it

really enjoyed the story was a bit hesitant at first but I couldn't stop reading it so I binge read it. Definitely would recommend people read it

Fanfic is great, I hope it gets more great reviews.

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MC's pacifism attitude leads to illogical decisions, him giving up profits and control of his company way too early without any plan. The dialogue has bad drama and arguments, and interactions are shallow. The pacing is too fast, events are like objectives, that are mentioned briefly and skipped, the plot devolves into poorly written explicit material.

It's a quite light hearted story and I doubt the mc will ever really struggle but I enjoy it. On a side note "Thumbs Up" for not deleting bad reviews unlike most other webnovel authors.

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