webnovel
Yash_Shah_7482
Yash_Shah_7482Lv21yr
2023-10-02 05:42

Brainless harem SI. Bad writing bad grammar. No plot. Dumped.

Liked by 105 people

LIKE
Replies19
XtrEEm
XtrEEmLv4

i dont understand why people trash on harem fics like if you dont like it dont read it. dont ruin it for other people just cuz of you harem bad in stories opinion. and if your argument on why harems are bad is that its unrealistic in modern society you are so wrong. sure in most places that were indoctrinated in to Christianity its not "allowed". dont mean its unrealistic.

Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv13

There is difference between having harem in a novel and having a bad harem novel. He is not talking about the fact that the novel has an harem, but how bad it is made

XtrEEm:i dont understand why people trash on harem fics like if you dont like it dont read it. dont ruin it for other people just cuz of you harem bad in stories opinion. and if your argument on why harems are bad is that its unrealistic in modern society you are so wrong. sure in most places that were indoctrinated in to Christianity its not "allowed". dont mean its unrealistic.
XtrEEm
XtrEEmLv4

Yes that is true except that the review was made before the harem was even made. Like I would understand if the review was made when there are like 80-100 chapters but the review was made when the romance was just pepper. There was no base to call it brainless. At that point saying that harems are bad whether it’s a fic or real life just cuz it is a harem is brainless. Like some cultures allow ut. And to deny it is wrong. Also in those culture all party’s have to agree to it

Space_Fox:There is difference between having harem in a novel and having a bad harem novel. He is not talking about the fact that the novel has an harem, but how bad it is made
The_JUDGE_
The_JUDGE_Lv1

SHUDUP

95_novel_maniac_95
95_novel_maniac_95Lv5

Tags:

camero
cameroLv4

tell me 3 story that you read where the harem was actually good

XtrEEm:Yes that is true except that the review was made before the harem was even made. Like I would understand if the review was made when there are like 80-100 chapters but the review was made when the romance was just pepper. There was no base to call it brainless. At that point saying that harems are bad whether it’s a fic or real life just cuz it is a harem is brainless. Like some cultures allow ut. And to deny it is wrong. Also in those culture all party’s have to agree to it
Jay11
Jay11Lv4

Meta essence gacha is the only one I can name off the top of my head but there was also spider man from ashes_

camero:tell me 3 story that you read where the harem was actually good
SERBMADHAUS
SERBMADHAUSLv12

harem in my writing is decent. don't mean to toot my own horn but my readers love it.

camero:tell me 3 story that you read where the harem was actually good
Ivno
IvnoLv3

The harem in this book is bad becauss instead of the romance happening organically the MC has a list of women he wants in his harem and when carol had to somehow accept being in a harem the author got lazy and made it happen of screen.

XtrEEm:i dont understand why people trash on harem fics like if you dont like it dont read it. dont ruin it for other people just cuz of you harem bad in stories opinion. and if your argument on why harems are bad is that its unrealistic in modern society you are so wrong. sure in most places that were indoctrinated in to Christianity its not "allowed". dont mean its unrealistic.
Zed1_Eren_
Zed1_Eren_Lv4

it's a fic about Tony so it's meaningless to say the Harem is bad ( and who hate Harem are just ..... let it be I can't say)

BearWithMe
BearWithMeLv14

Bot

The_Best_3329
The_Best_3329Lv4

Tony may be a Playboy but him having a harem, he very much became a family man

Zed1_Eren_:it's a fic about Tony so it's meaningless to say the Harem is bad ( and who hate Harem are just ..... let it be I can't say)
THIZZGATOR
THIZZGATORLv4

dude do you truly belive harems are realistic and found in today's society? If you think harems are 'realistic' boy do I have a story to tell you about this flat earth we live on.

XtrEEm:i dont understand why people trash on harem fics like if you dont like it dont read it. dont ruin it for other people just cuz of you harem bad in stories opinion. and if your argument on why harems are bad is that its unrealistic in modern society you are so wrong. sure in most places that were indoctrinated in to Christianity its not "allowed". dont mean its unrealistic.
XtrEEm
XtrEEmLv4

in modern western society ya no its unrealistic. But in other countries and other cultures, yeah, its realistic.

THIZZGATOR:dude do you truly belive harems are realistic and found in today's society? If you think harems are 'realistic' boy do I have a story to tell you about this flat earth we live on.
THIZZGATOR
THIZZGATORLv4

that's a very very small minority and is usually backed up by backwards ideologies that oppress women.

XtrEEm:in modern western society ya no its unrealistic. But in other countries and other cultures, yeah, its realistic.
Lord_of_lords
Lord_of_lordsLv1

Você é o melhor, sempre leio suas histórias, espero que você possa continuar postando sempre .

SERBMADHAUS:harem in my writing is decent. don't mean to toot my own horn but my readers love it.
image
ADHD_Guy74
ADHD_Guy74Lv4

Top Providence(not a fanfic,it's a novel), Dual Cultivation(novel as well), Meta Essence Gacha, Multiverse: Rise of the saiyan empire, Dimensional Wizard, Winds of change, Travelling the omni-realities, Fate: Dragon's journey, DxD Devils and Artifacts, Fate in Denial(fateverse), ATG Redux: 'average' young master, Otaku cultivator exploring the multiverse, P2W Uchiha

camero:tell me 3 story that you read where the harem was actually good
Marcia_05
Marcia_05Lv12

Tyranny of Steel is one of the stories where the harem is a beauty.

camero:tell me 3 story that you read where the harem was actually good
grimmhorizon
grimmhorizonLv15

no it's bc authors get way too tied up in romance and fitting in more interaction between them which typically feels unreal due to lack of real relationship experience in real life. the actual plot usually goes on the back burner and the story never proceeds and eventually the story which had great aspects gets dropped

XtrEEm:i dont understand why people trash on harem fics like if you dont like it dont read it. dont ruin it for other people just cuz of you harem bad in stories opinion. and if your argument on why harems are bad is that its unrealistic in modern society you are so wrong. sure in most places that were indoctrinated in to Christianity its not "allowed". dont mean its unrealistic.
Other Reviews
Related Stories

Marvel: Monkey King

Jack Hou was many things—a Triad lieutenant, a street-smart hustler, and an absolute menace to society. He ran Chinatown with a grin, picked fights like they were a hobby, and somehow thrived off pure madness and raw talent. That was, until he got riddled with bullets at his boss’s wedding trying to protect the bride. Dying? That sucked. Waking up twenty years in the past, in a new body, new world, and somehow even more broke than before? That sucked harder. Now trapped in the streets of 2002 New York, Jack is back to square one—hungry, penniless, and wanted by nobody. But things take a turn for the weird when an old man from K’un-Lun picks him up and claims he has the body of an immortal sage, destined to change fate. Jack’s response? “Yeah, nah. Sounds like effort.” Forced into martial arts training, qi cultivation, and unlocking his true potential, Jack has zero plans to follow orders. Instead, he does what he does best—run his mouth, break the rules, and cause absolute chaos. But when he starts awakening strange abilities, growing stronger than a normal human should, and attracting the attention of ancient forces, Jack realizes—maybe this isn’t just a second chance at life. Maybe he’s something more than human. Maybe… he was never human to begin with. Crazy fights, unhinged banter, and a monkey with no chill— Jack Hou is about to turn the Marvel world upside down, one bad decision at a time. A/N: This is NOT a translation, I make this Story myself. So there is no Original Source, it's in my Brain babyy... ~KujoW

KujoW · Movies
4.9
74 Chs