this work is easy to read , very good humor , but you need to add more single adventures for the main character........................................

5 star rating is enough just to know that it's a fanfic about Rick and Morty😆

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The constant meme inserts break the flow of the story and ruin the immersion not to mention the fact that more than half the fic is either spent spamming Latin blocks of text to get into the rankings which defeats the whole purpose if the author isn’t actually writing anything useful or for the MCs idle pointless rants on why he has such a hard life The mc complains way too much like it’s not even taht the mc complaining is a bad thing given his current world it’s just that if he could be the minimum level of funny jn his monologues it would mean the world since right now all of his dialogues are just rehashes of what he complained about before in very over the top fourth wall breaks that tries too hard to be funny There’s a reason why a lot of authors on here stray away from fourth wal exposures since it’s really hard to pull off

The mc is immensely annoying and the story hasn't even started.

In my opinion, this story only has one half chapter, the rest is to be in the usual filler ranking but too much breaks the fourth wall at the beginning and takes away the fun of the story.I honestly don't know why there is a sudden jump where no character development is shown.

out of five chapters only two of them are real chapters if you call constant complaining cheap fourth wall breaking and a whole lot of complaining how can you ask for Stones when you had one chapter and you teach your way onto the new fic board and my personal opinion it's a hot mess it may improve I don't know I don't care I won't be reading further

Just non stop complaining from the mc ———

4th wall break every 2 seconds. 2 different chapter skips, I'm good. also skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment

Godawful, bet the author hasn't made it into high-school yet. The type of writing that considers fourth wall breaking the epitome of humor, not to mention the endless amounts of edge. Also the amount of bloat is unreal.