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2023-10-02 20:34

The constant meme inserts break the flow of the story and ruin the immersion not to mention the fact that more than half the fic is either spent spamming Latin blocks of text to get into the rankings which defeats the whole purpose if the author isn’t actually writing anything useful or for the MCs idle pointless rants on why he has such a hard life The mc complains way too much like it’s not even taht the mc complaining is a bad thing given his current world it’s just that if he could be the minimum level of funny jn his monologues it would mean the world since right now all of his dialogues are just rehashes of what he complained about before in very over the top fourth wall breaks that tries too hard to be funny There’s a reason why a lot of authors on here stray away from fourth wal exposures since it’s really hard to pull off

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